Pre-Dawn Precious Moments

Red streaks beneath clouds paint a striking sky Precious moments they tease you before they fade and pass by

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/19/2019 10:13:00 PM

Love this gem, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/20/2019 9:15:00 AM

You are too kind to me, Line. Thank you so much, Gershon

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/19/2019 4:53:00 PM

Splendid write, Gershon. I usually get up early to enjoy the beautiful Colorado sunrises (or earth turns to be more exact). Many thanks for enjoying and commenting on a couple of my recent poems. Best on you - Bob

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/20/2019 9:15:00 AM

Bob, thanks for your support; and always a pleasure to read your poems. Cheers, Gershon

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 11/19/2019 4:43:00 PM

Great write Gershon. Love the comparison between the fading sky with moments that pass us by. Top class!! Best...Ron :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 9:25:00 PM

Top class comment too, my friend Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon

Chris Green

Date: 11/19/2019 3:45:00 PM

Wonderful GW. You know I'm a sucker for a beautiful sunrise.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/19/2019 9:25:00 PM

I sneaked this one in during the day, as I realize that you may be an all-day sucker, but you're certainly not a 24-hour sucker. (Did I just write that?! Prudish me? LOL.) Thanks, Chris. ~ Smiles, Gershon