Prayers

Perched high upon the escarpment
of sandstone rubble, the boy sat,
shaded from the rising of the sun
in the shadow of Kings.
Sharp eyed he preyed 
upon the tourist below, and to his God Allah.
His path was a treacherous one
looped and twisting like the snakes of ochre gold
shone cresting the brow of Ramesses
in the unearthly Valley of the Kings;
far from the osprey and marsh grass
of the beloved Nile.

Below the boy, on a zigzag path 
between the mouth-like openings to the netherworld,
tourists swarm, ants on a mound of honey stone
suckers of sweetness, oblivious, 
as they had done for centuries.

He sat as his father before him
hunkered down knees to chest
the vulture heraldic creature of Upper Egypt
death eater, little had changed except
now the robbers wore blue jeans and not the hajab.
He had earned his small bit
of the twentieth century..hawking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 9:00 AM
there is something so disturbing here yet very spiritual in tone... a smashin display of astounding conrast much like a the hubris of a prayer... delighted, debs! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 11:33 PM
wow, great writing again, DEb. I am glad I finally saw this one. Some of that inspiration from your trip, I presume!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Are u OK TEACH? missed u these past two days. luv.. we are getting more snow on top of this snow and I think they are both coming your way luv... brace yourself.. pupil... luv..
Richards Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 4:44 PM
You have brought great inspiration home from your travels....this story reveals how observant you are ...unlike what a tourist most often brings back...such insight to see the blue jeans and western thieves that prey on their survival.
Peranteau Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 6:30 AM
This write is not only perfectly poetic, but informative ! If I ever get to take this challenging journey, mine eyes will be "vulture" sharp, for the lil' purse snatcher ! *smiles* Great write dear poet ! I'm glad that you decided to continue blessing us with your writes on your journey to Egypt ! much love, james
Guzzi Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 6:15 PM
The boy was preying on the tourists and praying for a fat mark, sigh, he swooped down stole purse and fled back up the rubble pile on the otherside!
Pangelov Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Very good poetics. I felt Italian poetic school with Mediterranean magnificent imagery. Only trouble me couplets, which are hardly needed to slow the course of the Nile.
La France Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 7:33 AM
I loved this story of the "praying boy" the words just flowed ~beautifully~
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:37 PM
Little has changed. The class separation has been there since Noah's time. The kid on the hill might have a cell phone now but little has changed. Great poem. Vince
Sweetheart Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Intriguing piece Deb and entertaining reading about the boy ..your descriptions are quite image filled and impressive luv... a trip to remember for all time....
Jordan Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:09 PM
Deborah this poem is excellent in every aspect - a favorite - Very powerful and beautiful - God Bless, mj
Keys Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 2:26 PM
you painted a very clear picture, of what you described from thought, life and study. is this a picture of the detail and beauty from within or from outside. both very talented. thank you, chuck
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 11:47 AM
mystical is the word, deborah... wonderful attention to details with spellbinding images... this boy intrigues me no end! salute! :) nette
Falotico Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Your poetry stands out in the front... well written piece my dear poet friend
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Interesting how little really changes in the big picture. I whine a lot about times now but we had nothing when I was a kid and I wouldn't trade that childhood for a lifetime of riches. The times have changed but little else. Vince
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