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Prayer Can Do

the round vast expanse recording disc's recorder of whole universe nothing is destroyed even of actions and words form changes only in video's screen done can't be undone therein prayer can do it

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Date: 5/27/2015 9:14:00 AM
Prayers for the soul
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:09:00 PM
yes, I think God must have a video studio where his angels are watching recordings of all our prayers. well, this is what your poem made me think of.
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:47:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by here..... loved always,my lovely friend,bl
Date: 3/13/2015 12:15:00 PM
Deep. I understand though the prevailing theme. Prayer can do what our best efforts cannot. Love your haiku, Hugs! Kim :)
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Date: 3/13/2015 12:23:00 PM
Thanks for your touching comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

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