Prayer For Raven Reborn

PRAYER    FOR   RAVEN    REBORN

It seems only yesterday Raven was a child, but she is gone now,
Wandering in unknown mist-shrouded fields with  no flowers gay.
Does she recall her sunny childhood, with never a stormy day?
Her soul feels not my protection, and I cry to help her....... but how? 

Long ago I swept her up from the earth in my arms
As she tired of the bright warm running life of youth,
Put her to sleep in peace, and marveled at her charms
As she slept in the  child’s world of dare and truth.

My child  running through the deep butter meadow,
Young knees yellow with topaz  dust.  She gazes at all 
The   smiling  saffron  rays-of-sun   petals.   
A  field of dandelions’  bright   amber   glow,

Shining in   the  happy flower of their   life,
Their  radiant lemon  fingers full-spread 
To  welcome  the golden king of heaven. 
And in  shady spots under trees she picks  earlier ones,   

Metamorphosed  from  warm  mustard  to  pale milk  - 
Puff-balls  with furry innards,  an imagined skin, 
Hollow  airy  spheres of seeds. 
Parachutes  grey-white  in the wind, they  glide  and  twirl,

Cheerfully  child-chased   by  my little girl.
She checks her  time-clock with  puffs of  air-breath:
Two puffs near the heat of noon,   but
As evening approaches more breaths are needed.

Souls of flowers float away    -    like us   -
And  are  reborn in some spot not proud:
Maybe   rough surroundings,  maybe  dust,
Wherever  admittance is allowed.

Oh may  her  rebirth  be soon and may  I hold
Her just once  again.  May her soul  run again in meadows. 
The evening of my  life is  bitter with sorrows, 
Not knowing  she’s  returned from grey to gold.


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Written by Sydney Peck  for the 
Contest  “Among  the Dead”  (A Rambling Poet)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/19/2011 12:55:00 PM
Oh, Syd, this is so heartfelt. I can't imagine the pain of losing a child, burying her and hoping that someday her spirit will return to you. What a beautiful poem!! Thank you so much for your Soup Mail. I responded to it and am very grateful for the poem you sent to me. I'm deeply moved by your compassion. Wishing you beautiful days as well as success in the Raven contest. Thank you, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 7:57:00 AM
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