Prayer

Hush! Raise not your voice high to praise the Lord, because you can afford to please, when wind becomes a breeze. ------------------------- Form: Musette

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/28/2014 1:22:00 PM

powerful prayer paul love how this drew dear friend excellent pen

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Liam. Congrats on your latest collaborations; I am very much impressed!! Well done. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/28/2014 1:30:00 AM

love the first and third set .. :) but the second... mmmmmn .. but love the message.. :)!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 6:56:00 AM

i know.. :P!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/28/2014 4:01:00 AM

Glad you love the message, Olive_eloi. [Of course, it does not mean that I am not in favour of singing !:)] // paul

David Meade

Date: 11/27/2014 10:45:00 AM

A heart prayer -- loud and boisterous pumping out in rhythm but softness in the sweet air. An Elijah prayer . . . high praise my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 11:32:00 AM

Full marks for you, David!! That's exactly what I had in mind...Elijah!! He spoke only after things calmed down. Thank you. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/27/2014 10:07:00 AM

Serenity is heavenly Paul! Loved ur write much! Don't myself hv a clue as yet as to how to go about it!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 11:30:00 AM

Thank you Upma. Prayer and contemplation reach a higher level when the environment is one of silence and peace. // Do not give up on this one...you can do it...looking forward to reading it! // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/26/2014 9:37:00 PM

Very nice in style and subject Paul! Have a great day my dear friend. :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 11:39:00 AM

Thanks a lot Dorian; your comments on style and content are heartening. hugs // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2014 5:35:00 PM

Paul if its for Nette's contest you need your name on etc:-) beautifully penned my friend - very serene and calming write its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus
Date: 11/26/2014 6:04:00 PM

Hi Jan....I'm not sure which one to enter for the contest. I have written about a dozen and am undecided. I feel that I still have to grasp the right content and presentation. Thank you for the positive comments and top rating:) hugs // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/26/2014 5:08:00 PM

These verses sprinkle serenity..Amen. Favouriting this gem.

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 12:37:00 PM

Love your comments, Charm:) Serenity is the ideal word...thank you....also for the fav. (read your Musette...it flows along a winning path, if only given the opportunity!) // paul

Leon Enriquez

Date: 11/26/2014 5:07:00 PM

Dear Paul: Lovely write. Lovely read. Leon

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2014 12:32:00 PM

Enjoyed your visit, my friend Leon. cu // paul