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~ Never greet me, my love, for I could not say goodbye to you ... again. ~ ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "One Liner - Hello and Goodbye" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 12/24/2018 9:51:00 PM
Exactly! Precisely! The stab in the heart avoided. Poignant and so resonant. Well-deserving of its win in the contest. Best always, Gershon
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Date: 12/24/2018 5:00:00 AM
- Congratulations, Gregory :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/23/2018 8:55:00 AM
wonderful, wordsmith!!!
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Date: 12/22/2018 9:13:00 PM
I'm back with congrats and more congrats, Gregory!
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Date: 12/22/2018 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations for your win ! I can feel this :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 5:38:00 PM
That's so kind of you, Heidi - thank you so very much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/22/2018 11:02:00 AM
Touching, Greg. Congratulations on your great win in the one-liner contest! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn (I have a new limerick contest with a potential Tanzanite prize.)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 5:37:00 PM
Oh, I MUST enter, then, (and I still owe you a Soupie) ... thank you so much for your kind comments, Dear Poet! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 12/22/2018 9:22:00 AM
If only it was that simple Greg... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 5:36:00 PM
If the fates are kind, sometimes it IS, but such situations, like most in life, are rarely simple. Thank you very much for my placement - many fine poems on that list.
Date: 12/21/2018 12:46:00 AM
This is quite sad, but still it is beautiful. Gregory, I wish you best of luck in the contest. Hope to return soon with congrats. :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 5:31:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Kaveesha, and I am so thankful for your kind comments! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 12/20/2018 9:50:00 PM
That one line is heart breaking ... Best of luck in the contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, PS - blessings! :-)

Book: Shattered Sighs