Power of the Eyes

Power of the eyes Sucking you in the pupils Reflection downcast Russell Sivey

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2012 3:07:00 PM

Whoa!..Some strong eyes there..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/23/2012 3:08:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/23/2012 11:02:00 AM

Aw, this is reminding me of Kiwi, our not so courageous dog.:( She's looking downcast at the moment.:(( Still, I think their language is universal! A "Reflection downcast" isn't a hopeful one at all. Enjoyed this write!!! Mikki

Jack Horne

Date: 7/22/2012 6:21:00 AM

clever observations here, Russell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2012 9:17:00 PM

an amazing view Russell and an intimate revelation of love .. few lines of great wisdom and thoughts.. once again ..hypnotic luv..

Don Johnson

Date: 7/21/2012 8:57:00 PM

look n see the wanted outcome, imagination comes into play, thoughts are deeds keep thinking some, improve the outcome of your day... re: 'Power of the Eyes' Russell Sivey Don

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2012 4:44:00 PM

Hmm, sucked in by someone miserable it sounds with that downcast line!! I like to be sucked in by romantic eyes!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/21/2012 3:51:00 PM

But the image remains. Well done my poet friend. Michael