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Power of the Brain-Jq

Realise and enhance your strength. Stop worrying, be insouciant. Nail it! Do not ever quit. The triumph shall always shimmer. Strength is invincible will. Cogitate and play the game. Sorrow leads to grave defeat. Tears shall slay, the injured soul. 09/03/2019 Jueju-Qijue With A Twist Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina

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Charles Messina

Date: 4/17/2019 5:58:00 AM

Aditi, very well done poem. I had to place it at the bottom because the first words of the second stanza had to start with the last words of the first stanza. So sorry...Charlie

Aditi Sheemar
Date: 4/19/2019 1:19:00 AM

Thank you very much for selecting my poem too :). I am so sorry for not being able to understand the requirements properly. Glad that I am learning so many new forms of poems. Next time its gonna be perfect.:)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/16/2019 12:36:00 PM

"Strength is invincible will. Cogitate and play the game." Powerfully done, Aditi. Good luck in the contest my friend!

Aditi Sheemar
Date: 3/16/2019 2:03:00 PM

Thank you for such kind appreciation. :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/11/2019 6:41:00 PM

aditi, wonderful write, and I should listen to your words as sorrow is part of my life, it seldom leaves me, even when I am happy, it hovers in the background waiting ~

Aditi Sheemar
Date: 3/12/2019 3:41:00 PM

Thank you very much:) I am happy that you find strength in my words. Life is indeed very complex. Take charge and fight back.