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Powdery Blanket

The soft powdery blanket coats Some of Georgia's tall Pines Whose outstretched arms reach to the sky Offer prayer's few lines This a backdrop to Pale Pink Rose Who 'pon trellis still grows Her many blossoms now open She puts on her spring's show She has reached out to strong pear Kissed and entwined branches If allowed to continue hold Pear will give death chances Finis' The Pale Pink Running Rose has reached out and grabbed the Pear Tree and running up it...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/22/2013 9:21:00 PM
Ah the flowers of spring. You capture them well in your poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/21/2013 2:26:00 PM
Nette has said well. It's gorgeous poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:03:00 AM
my, sara...i read as if i were gazing through your poetic eyes... a gorgeous read; can;t wait to relish its final form... well done!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/21/2013 8:33:00 AM
A nice beginning to a seemingly scintillating poem. I am in line to read the final copy.
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Date: 5/21/2013 7:14:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love this write, I hope you finish this poem soon because I really want to read the finished product, this is very good my friend! You have painted a beautiful painting by your perfect words here, what a spectacular piece, Great Work!!
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