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Pouring

the rain is pouring it is pounding on the roof washing many thoughts Heidi Sands 4/20/19

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/8/2019 8:43:00 PM

Love that last line. Nice ku, Heidi! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/9/2019 8:13:00 AM

Thank you! Have a nice day :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/26/2019 3:13:00 PM

You have an understanding of haiku and how to write it with that aha moment. Excellent Heidi! : ) xcoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2019 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Connie. I am happy to see your comment on this today and appreciate it very much :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 4/26/2019 9:49:00 AM

May the Sunshine come swiftly after...lovely verse my dear friend...happy endings...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/26/2019 9:56:00 AM

Thanks so much WW. Continuing with more cold rain today. Still looking forward to Spring ! I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a nice day :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/25/2019 12:57:00 AM

I hope only sad thoughts - the good thought wont let the rain near them! I open up our curtains at night when its raining especially when there is a storm -i love to see the lightning streak across the sky. Great poem Heidi! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment Jennifer :) Enjoy the sights.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/23/2019 7:10:00 AM

Heidi....Your pen pours.....'Sounds like ....you are no stranger to the rain!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/23/2019 2:34:00 PM

Thank you Chuck. We had quite a bit recently. It melted a lot of snow. Our spring has been late. Thank you for your visit and comment :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/22/2019 9:22:00 PM

I always hope the rain will wash away all tears. Lovely, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/22/2019 10:33:00 PM

Yes, me too. Thank you Sandy :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/22/2019 2:41:00 PM

And that is exactly the way it does one's thoughts. Beautifully done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/22/2019 8:35:00 PM

Thank you very much M.L. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2019 12:46:00 PM

ohh, so lovely, heidi... we need rain; temp goes as high as 40 degrees!...huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/21/2019 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Nette. Wow, yes :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/21/2019 10:11:00 AM

Hope the rain washes winter away...Nicely penned Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/21/2019 1:37:00 PM

Hopefully. Thank you :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/20/2019 6:24:00 PM

Nice image Heidi, we have a heatwave at the moment. Hope you have a happy Easter. Tom.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2019 6:25:00 PM

Thanks Tom. I hope you stay cool. Happy Easter. :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/20/2019 3:46:00 PM

Nicely done Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2019 3:48:00 PM

Thank you Allen. Trying to break through writers block. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2019 3:22:00 PM

We had the rains yesterday..your turn today...enjoy the rainy hues Heidi..from your comfort windows.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2019 3:28:00 PM

Thank you! Yes, our turn today Vijay. I hope you have sunshine now. We have had many gray days that stole my muse lol. :)

Bette Bavington

Date: 4/20/2019 2:20:00 PM

Good job. I love it when it rains. It is a reminder that all is being washed clean.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2019 2:33:00 PM

Thanks Bette. My muse isn't quite with me. I appreciate your kind comment :)