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POUR NEWNESS ON ME

Washing away drab, dour and rotting 
elements, falling rains cleanse our earth anew.
Sunlight returns to beam upon fresh, crisp nature.
I have begged the rain to pour newness on me
but never does it heed my plea or grace my need.

Rain, I desperately beseech you, please, as a cloud
     do burst a purge of all thunderous fear, stormy, 
                          stinging pain and anxiety tidal waves 
                                               continuously knocking me down.
The sun will never warm me with healing, 
       soothing rays if the rain never floods my concrete 
                   dam of depression, freeing my life’s stream to 
                                                                flow with deep content.  
Though the rain denies me relief, it keeps 
          me company, for its dark skies match my 
                inner gray, dreary season and give me proper 
                                                     reasons to shelter in isolation.  
On rainy days, I may pretend that I am part of 
                        life, rather than a human drought of 
                                                              withering, mortal inertia.
I may even, fleetingly, allow myself to believe
               the returning sun will spot the drenched 
                         me and, in either mercy or love, revive,
                               refresh and restore my drowning, soggy 
                                          spirit with rays of therapeutic warmth. 
  
If only thunder would crack, roar and screech a 
demand for skies to pour suicide ideology drops 
down in a loud, rhythmic, lulling beat, such drops
would, in time, evaporate and I would realize 
the blessing of a true, deep, restful sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashley Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Dear CayCay, I am deeply moved by the mournful spirit, the dark, cloudy angst and the vivid, visceral imagery of your self, shredded and scarred yet beseeching the rain for cleansing of the "drab, dour and rotting". Your poem, your plea for the rain to "pour newness on me", for healing, is expressed with the soul-baring eloquence of emotions, raw yet so poetically portrayed. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes, my dear poet friend.. ~Susan
Agustin Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:15 PM
So proud of you , Caycay. You gave him quite the winner and fave of mine. Congratulations
Toney Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 2:54 PM
CayCay, love the sincerity, emotional candor, and the turn toward healing. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 20 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 21 has already started. You can find your current standing in my Mile 20 Checkpoint blog post.
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Let me comment to you in Soup. i had not read it before . I add it to my faves. Perhaps I'd use the object "thee" or "you" after beseech.
Roper Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 7:59 PM
Congratulations on your win, CayCay..
Hamilton Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Wonderful write Cay Cay, it's sadness portrays an unsettling feeling we all go through at times. Your word selection and execution were outstanding eg suicide ideology drops... mesmerizing, congrats on a fine win!
Godwin Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Thank you so much, John. Because I actually went thru a few years of suicide ideology, this one was written with the true rawness that despite passing, left its scar which isn't hard for me to visit with my pen. Hope that made sense. I once thought depressed people merely needed to 'change the channel', but I learned differently and will never judge anyone going thru such hell. I embrace your comments, your words always have a way of cheering me on. I value your presence on Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 6:43 AM
such great rhythm sweet lady, beautifully expressed and well deserved top placement. thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 12:46 PM
Honey, thank you for sharing the gift of yourself with all on Soup, your commitment is consistent and a blessing to all of us. You rock, and it allows us all to roll! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Breedt Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 3:39 AM
I wrote you an email but it doesnt go. I was choked up with this one. "A winters Tale" playing on the radio added the impact. All I say is . I know what you mean here
Lamoureux Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 5:21 PM
It makes a fellow afraid to go out in a rain storm!! A dark topic artfully expressed.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Thank God it is fiction for it is so convincing that my heart turned blue! Wonderfully written! Good luck dear, CayCay!
Scars Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 12:28 PM
CayCay, just BEAUTIFUL..you have a true gift lady..good luck :)-luloo
Hamilton Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 8:17 AM
"Human drought of withering, mortal inertia" the best line I've read today, really quality writing Cay Cay loved every word, well done! a7
Teagan Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 7:34 AM
I love rain, CayCay, it is as soothing as you have described it here. The descriptions used n your poem are stunning!
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