Pound-Bound Hellhound

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Note:  Greyhound is a U.S. bus line.

Doggone it, that blasted pup irks me
He thinks he’s my Mom’s fav’rite pee wee
     He grabs harmful toys
     From rascally boys
Then chews them while gloating, bad beastie!

I’m coming for you, Mr. Hellhound
I’ll see you returned to the pet pound
     The blues you will sing
     So just take a swing
One scratch on my head, you’ll go Greyhound





Image “B” Chosen
*Written December 16, 2018
For James Edward Lee Sr.’s “Baby Face, What’s You Thinkin’” Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/5/2019 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn!!
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Date: 12/21/2018 4:18:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, loved the content of your limerick. That picture is so funny. Looks like someone means business. The limerick fits the image perfectly. good luck in the contest. have a wonderful Saturday. hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 12/21/2018 2:46:00 PM
Creative work. He does look like a tough little codger. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 12/20/2018 7:21:00 PM
Carolyn, this is so cute and well done, really creative for the contest, best of luck ~
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Date: 12/19/2018 8:46:00 PM
G'day Carolyn … a couple of fine limericks to match the babes expression - well done; thank you - Lindsay
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Date: 12/18/2018 7:24:00 PM
You've really nailed this one -- A perfect match for that tough-guy babyface. G.L. in the contest, Carolyn! :) gw
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Date: 12/18/2018 10:28:00 AM
Oh that one is hilarious. Great photo too. Thanks for the laugh.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/18/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thanks for all your visits today, M.L. I'm enjoying your work!
Date: 12/18/2018 2:28:00 AM
Limericks come so natural to you, Carolyn. He's quite a tough one this baby...but at least I can't hear any four-letter words being uttered!! Have a lovely day...hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/18/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. Don't think he's learned any four-letter words yet :)
Date: 12/17/2018 10:49:00 AM
Carolyn I loved your limerick and the illustration, quite a mean little face! Good luck - sure this poem will be looked upon very favourably - good luck Carolyn. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/17/2018 11:08:00 AM
Thanks, Jennifer. The baby's face is quite a photo.
Date: 12/17/2018 7:10:00 AM
That facial expression sure says what you wrote..a fun read, Carolyn..exactly what the theme evokes. Best for a win.
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Date: 12/16/2018 8:58:00 PM
fun fun fun. this is the one I wanted to do too. If I ever get the time. I had so much to do today, Carolyn and still I did not finish.
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Date: 12/16/2018 8:12:00 PM
After watching AFV, it amazes me that ANYONE would allow an animal in their home, never mind around their baby! Good luck in the contest, and I'm happy I don't have to look at that baby face across the breakfast table! Aloha! Rico
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/16/2018 10:10:00 PM
He does sort of look like he's taunting and I agree, that face won't disrupt my morning tea. Thanks for your visit, Rico!
Date: 12/16/2018 5:39:00 PM
what fun limericks Carolyn:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/16/2018 10:10:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Jan.
Date: 12/16/2018 4:02:00 PM
Two great limericks Carolyn..
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/16/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. Really just one double.
Date: 12/16/2018 3:24:00 PM
gritty babe ready to punch that pup anytime... your humor knocks my shoes off, carolyn; very good lim!...huggs
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/16/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, Nette. Hope you have a great holiday season.
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