Potholes

The shovels scraping Filling big pothole in street My four brand new tires

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Robert Pettit

Date: 3/25/2019 5:55:00 PM

I hate those things. Especially when I do the majority of my driving at night when they are almost impossible to see!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/3/2019 9:03:00 PM

Ha, ha! My thoughts exactly here in Chicago. I imagine it's the same where you are. It's become risky business to buy a new car in an urban area these days! Nice one, Barbara! :) gw

Paul Callus

Date: 3/3/2019 2:57:00 PM

It was about time that something was done with that pothole, Barbara!! Yours is a good and clever senryu. Regards // paul

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/3/2019 11:48:00 AM

This sounds like you were driving in Col Springs, BeeGee! This place is rife with them. Great write as usual - hope all goes well with you. Thx for taking time to take a look at my entry for Bobby Mays contest - Bob

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2019 9:08:00 PM

Indeed, Barbara. We should expect a bad year for potholes!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2019 7:09:00 PM

OH MY, this is so clever!