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you could be my dream come true you thrill me with that thing you do my blue sky and morning dew the one who fit's my glass shoe with these words i write to you i hope my love comes through and through never to get over you till i hear the word's I do. I do then you'll be my dream come true and all my love belong to you

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Date: 5/15/2010 9:41:00 AM
this is cute. and the rhythm in you poem fits great. this is sweet(: -Always&Forever LYnette
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Date: 5/10/2010 7:48:00 PM
Hope the love shines for your special lady. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/9/2010 12:23:00 PM
A very romantic write John, love the glass shoe line. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 5/5/2010 9:32:00 AM
I know this melted her heart, John!! Sweet and truly beautiful..Thanks for commenting on my poems...Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/4/2010 12:09:00 AM
Aww, how special and sweet. Well, I hope your dream comes true. Beautiful write. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/3/2010 5:12:00 PM
A nice poem on love
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:33:00 PM
yes John a fairy tale love, happily ever after, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:51:00 PM
Interesting romantic love write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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