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Potency and Strength - Part 1

We shall not fall into darkness, even in dark times. We ought to be strong enough to face our demons. No one can fight our battles. No one can itch your skin, no one can be you. You should find what strength you've got and stand up with honor, Life is too short for second chances, life is not fair, life is cruel... You need to find yourself to be what you want to be. To become a better person, to become good.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2011 11:42:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Sami. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:59:00 AM
Well said in this inspiring write on be a better person and knowing it...enjoyed your thoughts
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:28:00 AM
There are other parts ;) Don't worry :P Thanks very much for your enjoyment
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:23:00 AM
I did enjoy this, but feel it needs a killer last line, something else..mmm like- "good at facing life". I dunno maybe you could expand the poem..still enjoyed it though. Cheers.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:08:00 AM
I'm not sure of its form so I put it Free Verse... If I am wrong I don't mind telling me :D
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