Possessions - Mini Poem 3

You gave me a ring that I might wear upon a finger.
A commitment of the highest order, asking
that I pledge all my remaining years.

Seriously?

    ~TH~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Tom, this made me lol. I love it. Great sense of humor, and wit, and creativity; And, I feel the same way regarding some things of marriage, which is really a Godly thing.
Hitt Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Iris - thank you! Thanks for reading -- ~Tom~
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 4:43 PM
lol - you didn't have to say yes! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Hitt Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 4:53 PM
HA! Oh yes I did! :-) Thanks for reading. ~Tom~
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