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After an appointment with one of many specialists My husband and I see regularly, We both felt a little depressed. We decided to go for a coffee at a quaint old shop, In Port Elliot, about half an hour's drive from where we live. We have not been there for over two years because of Covid. It has been raining more than usual this year in SA. And the weather has been the coldest for years. It had been raining all morning, but the sun began to shine as we approached the old cafe. The cafe is called "Jelly". It is in an exciting street called: "The Strand." It was a feature in the Australian film "Storm Boy." Outside Jelly stands an old-fashioned barrow, Filled with organic veg, fruit and fresh flowers Which is new every day and gives authenticity To this cafe of yesteryear. Sadly half of the shop is now used as a post office And the old fireplace and mantle shelf has been boarded up for a while. We have had coffee here many times, and it was strange, Not to see a cosy fire burning in the hearth. They still sell delicious coffee. After a welcome, sit down and chat, John and I went to pay at the counter, And to my delight and surprise, The pretty young lady serving gave me a beautiful bunch of poppies, That she took off the old wheelbarrow outside the shop. She graciously said as she passed them to me; we are closing early today And these are for you. Any negative thoughts. That I had felt or moaned about, Melted away, vanished into thin air. The sun was shining brightly with no sign of rain!

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Date: 9/8/2022 3:56:00 PM
The power of kindness, what a blessing, to give and receive. Thanks for the uplifting and charming poem today, Shirley. Hugs, Bill
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/8/2022 11:06:00 PM
Thank you, Bill It was so unexpected and graciously given; I only have to think about it, making me smile. Take care. And thank you for the hug.
Date: 9/7/2022 1:42:00 AM
One kind gesture Shirley is all it takes….I’m glad she gave you the flowers she picked the right person! Love your poem….Debx
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/8/2022 11:06:00 PM
Thank you, Deb What a lovely thing to say. Take care. ShirleyX
Date: 9/6/2022 9:29:00 PM
Love this bittersweet narrative, Shirley. COVID's changed a lot of things. Glad it only changed 1/2 of this. Cheers, Gershon
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/8/2022 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon A kind word or gesture can bring joy to anyone's day; the unexpected gift of the poppies touched my heart deeply. Take care. Shirley
Date: 9/5/2022 4:20:00 PM
Hello Shirley, as I read this poem, i felt I was there. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/6/2022 10:35:00 AM
Hello Shirley Hawkins, It is a beautiful day here. yes I am enjoying this day. Take care. / Darlene
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/5/2022 5:29:00 PM
Hello Darlene, How nice of you to say this; thank You. The visit to the cafe and the young girl's kind gesture were very uplifting (the coffee was an added bonus). I hope you are enjoying a pleasant day. Take care. Shirley
Date: 9/5/2022 11:19:00 AM
A nice gesture, jester?
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/5/2022 5:23:00 PM
G'day, Rico This is true. I still have the colourful poppies we were given a few days ago when we went to the cafe for coffee. The girl's kind gesture took away our negative feelings and made us feel more positive about the future. Take care, Rico

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