Positive Mental Attitude

I’m one hell of a guy
You should give me a try
I’m the kind you 
Could take home to mother
I can fix anything
With a nail and some string
And I really am
Quite a good lover

I’m a nice king of fellah
And I’d like to tell ya
I’m nothing at all
Like my brother
I am clever and smart
And I have a good heart
And you’ll find I’m
An excellent lover

I’m a wonderful bloke
Now this isn’t a joke
I’m a man quite unlike
Any other
I am sweet I am kind
And I’m certain you’ll find
I am such
An incredible lover

So if you feel that way
And you want me to play
Just ring up 
And give me a call
I’ll be with you tout suite
For I’m dying to meet
And I’m certain that 
You'll have a ball

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/28/2011 12:06:00 PM
Can't help but love a guy with such high self esteem. Enjoyed it, Joe. Fun judging this contest.
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Date: 2/28/2011 11:05:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, John. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:32:00 AM
A big congratulations on your win John W. I also believe it is one of your best poems. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:28:00 AM
What a very witty piece this is, John ;) Enjoyed this one and of how you leveled it up! and congrats on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:45:00 AM
You just got better and better! great write from an apparently supurb lover...lol. BG congrats.
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:36:00 AM
Congrats John on your awesome win in Joyce's contest with this unique write luv.. enjoy .. your top ten moment luv..
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:24:00 PM
hahaha, The way you keep repeating your lover skills at the end of each stanza. What a charmingly fun read. A big congratulations to you on your win!
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Date: 6/17/2010 1:09:00 PM
Great explanation of your self..Keep the creative pen flowing..If this is for the contest, should do well...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:06:00 PM
Ha Ha, love how that PMA elevated your lover status. Great rhyme & flow too. Enjoyed the read thanks. Good luck if this is for the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/7/2010 3:56:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon John. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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