Portrait of Desire

Read beauty in his words They longed with a desire For beauty a portrait held Inspiration being hot as fire Falling into his every word Swallowed into each verse Longing to be that portrait Releasing him from a curse To feel his lips soft shakiness Turning into a confident kiss I melt in his warm embrace Breathing in me such a bliss Sighs escape t'ween parted lips My curves his hands do caress Lips that kiss my naked flesh T'would be heaven I confess I wish i could be that portrait That sparked inspirations fire To be able to live in his words Inside such a beautiful desire
Contest; Strand special 12 Sponsor: Brian strand

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Date: 1/1/2020 7:23:00 AM
Lovey poem, Brenda! Beautiful last stanza! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/2/2020 11:42:00 AM
Fran thank you so very much!;)
Date: 12/31/2019 7:00:00 PM
Lovely, Brenda--congrats!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/31/2019 7:45:00 PM
LJ thank you so much!;)
Date: 12/31/2019 4:27:00 PM
Great write Brenda, I see the contest sponsor liked it too, so congrats on another win!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/31/2019 5:30:00 PM
John thank you so very much!;)
Date: 12/31/2019 2:24:00 PM
Congrats, Brenda!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/31/2019 5:29:00 PM
Juliet thx so much!;)
Date: 12/31/2019 12:05:00 PM
BIG congrats on your top win Brenda--a lovely poem.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/31/2019 5:29:00 PM
Ikay thank you so much!;)
Date: 9/18/2019 7:25:00 PM
This is ew la la hot and ew la la beautiful. Great stanzas all kick in for a glorious sum total. Want you to know I loved the co-write you did with Sandra - said so on her pages - y'all write well together. This is as steaming in its hotness as it is in creativity. Wowey ... CayCay
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/19/2019 8:40:00 AM
Hahaha! Thank you so much CayCay! It's so appreciated!;)
Date: 9/18/2019 5:00:00 PM
This may be an 'older poem,' but the feeling, the sizzle, is certainly as fresh as ever! :) gw
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/19/2019 8:39:00 AM
Gershon thank you so very much!;)
Date: 9/18/2019 2:52:00 PM
wow...wherever this inspiration came from it's gorgeous, one can feel the yearning to burn in another's poems... love this one! :) hugs
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/19/2019 8:39:00 AM
Thank you my friend! Your too kind!;)
Date: 9/18/2019 2:47:00 PM
Wow, now this sure did heat up the afternoon. Sensually beautiful Brenda. This was an alluring piece of art that would look wonderful hanging in any gallery.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/19/2019 8:38:00 AM
Lol glad it brought some Herat although it's rather hot outside as is! Thank you Chris!;)
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