Portrait of Desire

Read beauty in his words They longed with a desire For beauty a portrait held Inspiration being hot as fire Falling into his every word Swallowed into each verse Longing to be that portrait Releasing him from a curse To feel his lips soft shakiness Turning into a confident kiss I melt in his warm embrace Breathing in me such a bliss Sighs escape t'ween parted lips My curves his hands do caress Lips that kiss my naked flesh T'would be heaven I confess I wish i could be that portrait That sparked inspirations fire To be able to live in his words Inside such a beautiful desire
Contest; Strand special 12 Sponsor: Brian strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Grasso Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Lovey poem, Brenda! Beautiful last stanza! Congratulations! ...Fran
Chiri Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Fran thank you so very much!;)
Carber Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Lovely, Brenda--congrats!
Chiri Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 7:45 PM
LJ thank you so much!;)
Hamilton Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Great write Brenda, I see the contest sponsor liked it too, so congrats on another win!
Chiri Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 5:30 PM
John thank you so very much!;)
Ligon Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Congrats, Brenda!
Chiri Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Juliet thx so much!;)
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December 31, 2019 at 12:05 PM
BIG congrats on your top win Brenda--a lovely poem.
Chiri Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Ikay thank you so much!;)
Godwin Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 7:25 PM
This is ew la la hot and ew la la beautiful. Great stanzas all kick in for a glorious sum total. Want you to know I loved the co-write you did with Sandra - said so on her pages - y'all write well together. This is as steaming in its hotness as it is in creativity. Wowey ... CayCay
Chiri Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 8:40 AM
Hahaha! Thank you so much CayCay! It's so appreciated!;)
Wolf Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:00 PM
This may be an 'older poem,' but the feeling, the sizzle, is certainly as fresh as ever! :) gw
Chiri Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Gershon thank you so very much!;)
Adams Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:52 PM
wow...wherever this inspiration came from it's gorgeous, one can feel the yearning to burn in another's poems... love this one! :) hugs
Chiri Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 8:39 AM
Thank you my friend! Your too kind!;)
Green Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Wow, now this sure did heat up the afternoon. Sensually beautiful Brenda. This was an alluring piece of art that would look wonderful hanging in any gallery.
Chiri Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Lol glad it brought some Herat although it's rather hot outside as is! Thank you Chris!;)
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