Portal

Quote By Poet "The world has gone crazy, I just happen to be living in it." Many questions I have asked, the questions come and go very fast. Yet my thoughts seem to outlast, this ride can be a wild blast. Did I fall into a portal from the past, am I awake and will this last.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2024 9:38:00 AM

Enjoyed very much, Paula! It was zippy and a fun ride!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/28/2024 8:19:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Portal" write. It was fun to write... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2024 7:57:00 PM

Love, love, love the quote, Paula. Methinks it applies to past, present, and probably future too. ~ Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/22/2024 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writings. Glad you like my "Portal" write/love, love, love the quote. I have said this for many years. Yes, applies to past, present, and the future. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Silent One

Date: 1/20/2024 7:15:00 AM

Wise words my dear friend and I am sure you did not fall into a portal.. but nothing wrong with being traditional.. have a lovely weekend..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:08:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Portal" write. In many ways, guess I am traditional. Hope you are having a great weekend... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/19/2024 5:31:00 PM

A gripping poem, with very fine images. Nice work, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2024 7:05:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Portal" write to be gripping with very fine images... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2024 12:21:00 PM

- An interesting question, Paula...lovely written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2024 12:48:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my "Portal" write. Many questions do not come with an answer. Hugs... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Ink Empress

Date: 1/19/2024 11:04:00 AM

I absolutely love the rhymes and flow of your word weaving here dear paula, always a pleasure reading your work. Especially the way you’ve interpreted the prompt and delivered a seamless write is impressive, best wishes for the contest, sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2024 12:46:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my "Portal" write. It makes me very happy to hear you say, it is always a pleasure reading my work. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/19/2024 9:49:00 AM

Love your monorhyme, Paula. Monorhyme can be difficult but you have made it look easy! I love the line "did I fall into a portal from the past?" Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2024 12:43:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my "Portal" write. Also glad you love my line "did I fall into a portal from the past?" Guess one never knows... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/19/2024 9:39:00 AM

Portal~Date Written: 1/19/2024

Robert Zimmerman
Date: 1/19/2024 10:15:00 AM

Nicely done Paula. The style is well constructed and the meaning is CLEAR! ZIM