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Porcelain Passion, Again

Two smooth toned bodies Each like China in their hands Porcelain passion <->v<*>

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/3/2014 10:59:00 PM

You had me here, I was on a completely different path, I have to say, your thoughts. much more romantic and sweet, great write!!!

James Fraser
Date: 9/4/2014 4:19:00 PM

A little romance now and again, to take away life's groans and pains. Glad you enjoyed it Arthur, James )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2014 4:23:00 AM

- James, a truly romantic gem - Love it :) - Have a great Wednesday :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser
Date: 8/21/2014 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise. It still makes me smile what one can write using so little words - James...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/19/2014 5:44:00 PM

passionate,sensual yet genrle and delicate-Wow

James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 6:00:00 PM

With a delicate touch, caressing smooth. Each will know, their next one's move. In this situation, in love has this, their telekinetic thoughts, tender bliss <*> thank you kindly Charmaine for gracing my humble poem from my past (<*>) James :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/19/2014 5:16:00 PM

Love it my friend...sensual

James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 5:20:00 PM

Short, but sweet, thanks kindly Tim, James.......

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/19/2014 4:55:00 PM

Oh James! My mind in is a passionate place right now and you are leading me on :) great senryu sweetie :)

James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 5:07:00 PM

So few words can say so much. Even distance speaks, when it can't touch. It's all within us, this writes we call. Endeavour, explore, life's here for us all. Glad you enjoyed so few words written down. In romance we are all, in bodily gown - <*> James ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2014 4:50:00 PM

Great t'pau song title you got in there James LOL - wonderful senryu Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 8/19/2014 5:17:00 PM

I am the same way...Music inspires

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 5:03:00 PM

quite a few of my recent writes have song titles as the poem Title - tends to draw people in:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 4:59:00 PM

Thanks Jan, now you've been introduced to the music factor I mentioned in my previous comment on your Emma/Elephant poem. It's amazing what can inspire ones thoughts <*> xx James :)