Popsicles

Popsicles for sun Drops on chin...excess oozes Slow boat to the sea Inspiration from Raul's picture

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 3:24:00 AM

Reading your poetry this morning, Sara, has been a wonderful way to start the day. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your most welcome recent comments on my poetry. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2010 12:39:00 PM

Yes, what Izzy said, this is SO creative, and I think would be deserving of a win! LUv, andrea

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/25/2010 8:05:00 AM

Creative and lovely :)

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/25/2010 7:51:00 AM

Excellent job my friend.... Keep up all the good work.....:JP]

Tobey Hill

Date: 2/25/2010 6:38:00 AM

well done..TAH

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 5:16:00 AM

A lovely version of the photo Sara.. popsicles in Summer are great coolers..like the sea cooling the rocks .. luv your last line.. good luck in the contest... should be a winner ..so unique.. luv.. Linda-Marie.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/25/2010 5:05:00 AM

funny, I saw that face like the michelin man.