Poppy

with whispers she makes shadows all hold hands
the West wind turns it's back at her command.
With one cold glance the daisies lose their leaves
she holds nature in her thrall, she believes.
Making potions in a jar to made-up tunes,
telling fortunes using Lego bricks for runes.
Poppy says she's had the gift since she was ten,
Mum hopes she'll grow out of it, who knows when.
With crystals, string, a map and twigs for rods
she finds lost things, assisted by the Gods.
A hair grip that she wore when she was three
and a boiled sweet down the back of the settee.
Buoyed by this success, she moved out to the fields
to see what her divining skills could yield.
Dry leaves sighed with every step she made,
the rods directing Poppy through the glade
when a hand took hold her ankle from the ground
from something that did not want to be found.
Faded posters on the lamp posts now replaced
with another set that feature Poppy's face.
Two missing girls, the same town, in five years,
children play behind locked gates amidst their fears
'till father time puts all of this behind them, but
Lucy says she has a gift-
and she can find them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 6:35 AM
Very dark, quite chilling the ending. Is Lucy to be next? Sometimes its best not to seek evil out unless one has the power to vanquish it. Brilliant and highly creative write my friend! A super 7 from me..
Wigley Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:14 AM
Thanks, Robert. Leaving endings open is very powerful. Thanks for the 7. Regards, Viv
Baumgarn Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 2:14 AM
I liked the almost haunted feel at the start, Viv. Almost chilling, and I say that respectfully because way back in my early college days I did the Quija board thing once and got the dickens scared out of me. Your poem ends up being about hope instead. Bravo.
Wigley Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 2:30 AM
Likewise, Brian, with the board. a group of us had a scary episode, and all spent the night in the same house. Woke up next morning to a gas leak that nearly killed us all. There are more things in heaven and earth, as Shakespeare quoth. Best not to dabble. Thanks for popping by. Viv
Grahamburglar Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 7:06 PM
This was mesmerizing and held my interest from the creepy start to the foreboding end. Well written, and excellent plotline. =) Easy 7 for this one.
Wigley Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Thanks Preston, I don't normally do dark. Appreciate your valued input. Regards, Viv
Callus Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:42 AM
This is one of the best poems that I've read today. There is a powerful dark side to it. Will we be seeing Lucy's poster up next? #7 // paul
Wigley Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 6:47 AM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your comments- yes, I liked the idea of the full circle ending to it, the possibilty of future peril. The dark hours can be quite conducive to poems like these. May have to sleep with the light on in future :) Regards, Viv
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May 23, 2015 at 11:36 PM
Hi Viv, this is deep, a horrible situation. The poem was gripping right after I read about the 2 missing girls. Enjoyed.... SKAT
Wigley Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 12:03 AM
Thanks, SKAT, no idea where it came from, I just woke up at 1:00a.m, switched on my cellphone and scribbled it down. Must stop eating cheese before bedtime. Viv x
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