Popping In Colours

Attracted by the different hues in glass bottles 
                          My little daughter saw them lined on dad's table
                             An irresistible passion to savour their delight
                                  Brought her in close proximity to dad
                         Sitting on his lap at meal times became a routine
                  Her eyes moved to his hands as he picked up his capsules 
                       She parted her lips with a hope it would be popped
                          In her mouth too as he did with whatever he ate
                  Disillusioned that the green, red and yellow shades remained 
                       Mirages to a child learning names of attractive colours
                Next noon she toddled up the table when none were within view
                 And grabbed a bottle with the brightest red and wriggled down
         Sadly the bottle slipped, crashed and the floor glowed with its ruddiness 
                One wail but her eyes sparkled, loudly babbling, 'Red, red, red!'
              The next morn there were two rows of bottles spread on the table
       Coloured gelatine capsules and tablets for old grandpa to recoup and restore
             Chocolate gems in distinct tints for his grandchild to accompany him
       But, it was grandpa's turn to open his mouth to feast on her tinged chocola's!


                                                   June 1, 2016
                                                For Lewis Raynes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Hi Balveen, I enjoyed your take on this 'colorful drug' theme! Very well done! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Many thanks, dear Sandra!
Misra Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Beautiful poem, well deserving of the placement in the contest. Loved the last line. Congratulations on your win, Balveen. Am sure I'll be seeing your name again and again in the winner's lists. ~karam~
Cheema Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Aww Karam! How sweet of you to wish so! Love...
Puddifoot Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 4:20 AM
good use of colour, congrats on your win in the contest!
Cheema Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 4:21 AM
Thanks Charlotte!
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