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Popping In Colours

Attracted by the different hues in glass bottles My little daughter saw them lined on dad's table An irresistible passion to savour their delight Brought her in close proximity to dad Sitting on his lap at meal times became a routine Her eyes moved to his hands as he picked up his capsules She parted her lips with a hope it would be popped In her mouth too as he did with whatever he ate Disillusioned that the green, red and yellow shades remained Mirages to a child learning names of attractive colours Next noon she toddled up the table when none were within view And grabbed a bottle with the brightest red and wriggled down Sadly the bottle slipped, crashed and the floor glowed with its ruddiness One wail but her eyes sparkled, loudly babbling, 'Red, red, red!' The next morn there were two rows of bottles spread on the table Coloured gelatine capsules and tablets for old grandpa to recoup and restore Chocolate gems in distinct tints for his grandchild to accompany him But, it was grandpa's turn to open his mouth to feast on her tinged chocola's! June 1, 2016 For Lewis Raynes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/3/2016 10:27:00 AM
Hi Balveen, I enjoyed your take on this 'colorful drug' theme! Very well done! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/3/2016 11:24:00 AM
Many thanks, dear Sandra!
Date: 6/3/2016 7:39:00 AM
Beautiful poem, well deserving of the placement in the contest. Loved the last line. Congratulations on your win, Balveen. Am sure I'll be seeing your name again and again in the winner's lists. ~karam~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/3/2016 11:24:00 AM
Aww Karam! How sweet of you to wish so! Love...
Date: 6/3/2016 4:20:00 AM
good use of colour, congrats on your win in the contest!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/3/2016 4:21:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte!

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