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"Poppies ... yes, poppies! Poppies will put them to sleep! Poppies!" The rather prophetic irony is not lost on me, sadly, and the reality of an epidemic that has taken many lives ... and even MORE souls ... It takes your soul FIRST ... then your will, your job, your spouse, your children, your home, your car, your teeth, your self-respect, your sanity ... It's a slow death, but an effective suicide nonetheless ... just more costly, more painful, and more torturous, (for everyone) ... No Wizard's balloon to fly you back to reality, no Good Witch to wave her wand, no Ruby Slippers to tap you back to a better time ... Just a nightmare that never ends, and a flying monkey that's all too happy to remind you what's at stake, even if you DO get him off your back ... I dream of a Yellow Brick Road and an Emerald City, but it's just that - a dream - and in-between? All those gorgeous, heavenly poppies ... And you know there's little chance you'll never get past their beauty and aroma ... even though it's all just a spell.

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Date: 6/21/2017 4:34:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/costly_reprieve_853473 ..... That is my boyfriend's poem :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/21/2017 4:43:00 PM
Thank you for sharing - Love it!
Date: 6/16/2017 3:10:00 AM
A sad poem and a real point of view. Well done Greg :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/16/2017 8:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara - a subject that needs much more attention, in my humble opinion, as I have seen it destroy many lives, and it is getting worse. I was one of the lucky ones, as I should no longer be here - I KNOW that was for a purpose, at the very least, to bring more attention to it. :-)
Date: 6/14/2017 9:21:00 AM
Very tough subject. And very true. My boyfriend, also on Soup, once wrote a poem about his addiction. A very honest poem. Maybe I will post my poppy poem soon.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/16/2017 8:03:00 PM
I would love to see BOTH - your poppy poem is wonderful! I would like to read W2's poem as well, as you know, we have similar struggles. Thanks for your support, Buddy!
Date: 6/13/2017 8:00:00 PM
Great and sad write, Greg.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/13/2017 8:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim ... it's a tough subject, (for me especially), but it needs to be talked about and written about and discussed MUCH more than it is ... it's destroying our country.

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