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For Tania Kitchin's Cartoon Character Clerihew Poetry Contest

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Popeye The Sailor Man

Popeye the Sailor Man
sure could pop spinach out of a can.
Strength and pep he would gain.
Might we say spinach was his cocaine?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Messina Avatar
August 18, 2025 at 4:57 AM
LOL- One never knows. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win!
Famuyiwa Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:32 PM
This is really a bomb. Congrats.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Aww. Thanks
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 6:51 PM
Congrats! As long as Cocaine wasn’t his spinach ;)
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 3:57 PM
lol ~ good one, Andrea
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 12:55 PM
Congratulations on your win!
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 10:23 AM
- Back with congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 9:40 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write again. Popeye is our guy. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day with your win.............
Miller Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:36 AM
A Clerihew; "I Yam what I yam and Dats what I Yam" Fun poem Andrea and congratulatons
Kitchin Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win with your funny clerihew.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Thank you. Much appreciated
Singh Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 8:14 PM
A humorous poem over a cartoon character.Well done.Wish you the best in the contest
Rodgers Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 2:25 PM
Dear Andrea, This one made me laugh out loud! You’ve captured Popeye perfectly with that unstoppable, spinach-powered punch of energy and then you twist it with that sly, cheeky question at the end. Comparing spinach to “his cocaine” is just mischievous enough to make me grin and shake my head in admiration. Blessings, My Dear Andrea, Daniel
Daniels Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 12:31 AM
Nice one ! Hi Andrea, I couldn’t find your blog, so I am making this comment here : to refer to a poetic form as an Asian form is considered racist. Please could you specify what exact form you are referring to in your current contest description. Best intentions.x. Asia refers to a geographical region & not a poetic form. Best intentions.x.
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 1:14 PM
I specified 4 to 10 lines. This was meant to prevent people from writing tanka or a series of haiku or sijo, for example. Soup lists only 10 Asian forms or less than that. Sorry if you found my directions racist, but I prefer forms. Many Asian poems are very long and it is mainly the short forms that people here are familiar with. I just assumed people would realize I was only referring to short forms per my requirements when I asked for no Asian poems. I should have said Asian "forms"
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Agreed. She should have written (not short poem or more than 5 lines or ten lines ...) Secondly, Asian poems forms are so many! Third, it is not the right word.
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 2:27 PM
Yes. I googled again Asian poetry. It lists around ten forms, so it is a "thing" and not racist at all.
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 2:23 PM
If you google Asian poetry forms , you WILL get a list of what they are. I believe I said short Asian poetry forms. Something like that. Most people at Soup take that to mean tanka, haiku, senryu, sijo. Forms 5 lines and under. These are the short Asian forms more typically used and understood by those who sponsor contests here. Hope that explains it.
Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:36 PM
The more he eats the less left for me. I do not like spinach. Nice entry for the contest, Andrea. Good luck, my friend. Bill
George Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:16 PM
The last line is really an icing on the cake. Quite hilarious.
Hind Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:56 PM
LOL this is funny!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 3:40 PM
Thanks.
Loving Iii Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 10:04 AM
I wouldn't go as far as to say that.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:39 PM
Spinach for him was far more unrealistic though.
Evangeline Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 8:50 AM
Oh, this certainly brings back memories. I think I can credit Popeye for making spinach my favourite vegetable. Not to cocaine levels, of course, but who doesn't want to be super strong? Thanks for writing this gem!
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:25 AM
I thought spinach was a horrible veggie because my mother only used it from the can. I did not even realize it was similar to lettuce! Then later in life I learned it tasted great just in a salad eaten raw!
Mac Donald Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Hmmmm... I'd written 3 Soupmails to you yesterday, 2 to Kim today. Go figure! I think I'll need to reboard "the good ship lollipop. I think last time I'd been thrown overboard, could ask fPopeye to save me. However, he's always busy helping Olive Oil
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:20 AM
I think I got at least two of them and replied to one. Didn't you get my reply?
Buhagiar Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 3:30 AM
It will surprise you to know that in Malta, we have a small village dedicated to Popeye. Very popular.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:20 AM
that's so cool
Sheehan Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 10:22 PM
Great write. Popeye was my favorite cartoon while a child. Very creative. Thanks for posting.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:40 PM
I was such a silly kid, I actually had a crush on this cartoon character, along with Mighty Mouse.
Kerr Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 7:23 PM
Hello Andrea, I simply adore this oh so charming piece. Superb rhythm and flow. Thanks for your comment on my poem and for the time you spent searching for a work of mine you hadn’t read. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:39 PM
thanks, Howard
Godwin Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 2:47 PM
Yes, but thank goodness it didn't cost like cocaine or he could never have bought all those hamburgers for what's his name, and Olive Oil's weight, well, she definitely could've been a snorter. (does this count as gossip?) I really, really, like this your Popeye the Sailor Man. Soupy. Love, CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:40 PM
thanks, sweetie. I have a new mail for you
DiMino Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 2:08 PM
Cheaper and healthier alternative. Well put.
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 3:40 PM
Thanks, Joe
Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 1:01 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Popeye sure did love his spinach. Love watching the old TV shows. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away..........
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 3:41 PM
You do a lot of contests like I do!
Mac Donald Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 11:01 AM
LOL, fortunately Wimpy didn't care much for spinach. Fun write, thanks for sharing, Andrea! :))
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Thanks
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