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Poor Fly





There once was a pesky fly
He kept buzzing 'round my eye
I gave him a whack
He fell on his back
Smack in my blueberry pie!




For the Insect contest..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 7, 2010 at 6:22 PM

Congrats BG on your winning poem in the Limerick contest..with this really good one.. enjoy another sweet victory..with luv..

Matthew Anish

August 7, 2010 at 2:12 PM

A limerick worthy of Ogden Nash! Keep'em coming! Thank you for your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish

Francine Roberts

August 7, 2010 at 10:39 AM

cute one congrats on your win

Sean Kelly

August 7, 2010 at 7:15 AM

Blueberry and fly pie ??? Well it rhymes !! . Looking forward to limerick re tit-for-tat !!! ..

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 7, 2010 at 3:56 AM

Congrats on your win, Barbara

Carrie Richards

August 6, 2010 at 5:58 PM

Hi Barbara.... Such a cute poem....would you mind if I use your poem as inspiration for the new Limerick contest....??? Hope that's okay with you??

Brandee Augustus

August 6, 2010 at 3:41 PM

Congratulations with win! This is perfectly cute! thank you so much for giving me my first, first place finish! Soup mail!!

John Freeman

August 6, 2010 at 11:18 AM

Congratulations, Barbara, on your success with this, "Cool" Agape, Moses

James Fraser

August 6, 2010 at 10:21 AM

Oh no, not the pie. Many congratulations Barbara on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem. If was not for the food chain, I'd swat them all. Have a lovely weekend >> James,xx