Poop On De Soup

If there ain't no room for de poop
To make poets laugh on de Soup
Then humour has gone,
Flushed right down de john
Mixed up wit de natural gloop!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Funny and so true! Love this one Natasha. Congrats! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 10:49 PM
Nice relating it to Soup!! Congrats
Scragg Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Thanks Andrea
Flood Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 3:39 PM
I’ve thoroughly enjoyed all the gross, disgusting, unpalatable entries in Jan’s contest, BUT THIS SHOULD BE FIRST PLACE in its own right, Natasha. The rest of us should flounder in 2nd place. Loved it. Terry
Scragg Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Thanks Terry glad you enjoyed it.
Allison Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 4:29 PM
Cant agree more with your sentiment Natasha!! Thanks so much for supporting the contest and many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Scragg Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 11:03 PM
Thanks Jan. All the best :-D
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June 20, 2023 at 6:17 PM
A super Limerick Natasha, there’s always room to squeeze in some poop on the soup… Belle
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June 21, 2023 at 11:05 AM
Thanks Belle :-)
Lane Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 5:53 PM
There should always be room for poop on the Soup. Good limerick, Natasha.
Scragg Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Lin :-)
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