Home » Poems » Terry Miller » Pool Fool

Terry Miller | + Follow Poet |

Pool Fool

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Terry Miller.

Entry for the Picture Prompt Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico

A witless young man named Abdul one day dropped his phone in the pool. With his face in the wet, he could TikTok still get, no need to dive in; he’s no fool!

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/9/2024 5:13:00 AM

Congrats on your win! Lively limerick!!

Karen Jones

Date: 8/27/2024 8:34:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your win

Terry Miller
Date: 8/28/2024 2:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Karen

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/22/2024 8:26:00 PM

Love it Terry.. Well done :)

Terry Miller
Date: 8/23/2024 12:51:00 AM

Thank you so much

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2024 12:17:00 PM

I see you got a trophy with this one. WAY to GO

Terry Miller
Date: 8/23/2024 12:51:00 AM

Thank you

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/19/2024 6:23:00 AM

Noice! Congratulations! Xo

Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 2:00:00 AM

Thank you so much

Jonathan Medida

Date: 8/18/2024 4:19:00 PM

Congratulations!

Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 2:00:00 AM

Thank you Jonathan

Paul Callus

Date: 8/18/2024 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations on this trophy win, Terry! Best regards // paul

Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 2:00:00 AM

Thank you Paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2024 11:23:00 AM

Dropping back with many congrats on your trophy placement Terry:-) hugs jan xx

Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 2:01:00 AM

Thank You Jan

Margarita Lillico

Date: 8/18/2024 11:04:00 AM

Congratulations!, Terry! “Witless” but witty!!!

Terry Miller
Date: 8/22/2024 2:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, also for the Trophy placement and for running this fun contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2024 2:41:00 PM

Gosh a water proof phone. Or not. Haha. Good one

Terry Miller
Date: 7/29/2024 9:15:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2024 10:37:00 AM

very funny interpretation of the poem! friend's grandson dropped her phone down the loo - whilst it went to the repair shop she used her late husbands phone - can you imagine getting a call 'from beyond the grave; it was surreal :-( hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/25/2024 2:43:00 PM

On some crime documentary, I saw police do a copy of a murdered woman's old cell phone and they texted their suspect as of from the grave. It so unnerved him that he went to where he buried her and the police got him!