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Pooh Dunny It - a Bowel Shatt-Ering Senryu

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Hi Poo Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless 09/27/23

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loo paper and turd remain in the toilet bowl ~ who forgot to flush?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2023 7:28:00 PM

yukky POO. Congrats, Jan.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2023 3:33:00 PM

I'm definitely not getting the blame for that, Jan!! :) But you can blame me for laughing about it :) :) Hugs // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/30/2023 3:18:00 PM

hmm that happens every now and then, when they flush I whisper Amen ! congrats on your win dear Jan, your always the Queen of comedy here,

Charles Messina

Date: 10/30/2023 3:00:00 PM

LOL Love your sense of humor, Jan. Many congrats on your win! Hugs xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2023 1:54:00 PM

Funny one Jan! Congratulations! :)

Terry Miller

Date: 10/30/2023 9:05:00 AM

Very funny; congratulations

Karen Croft

Date: 10/2/2023 6:10:00 PM

Very funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2023 8:02:00 AM

thanks karen xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/30/2023 7:35:00 PM

Jan, a sight I hate to see in public restrooms, hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2023 3:58:00 AM

I went into one last week - you wouldnt even want to rest your tush on it, it hadn't been flushed at all. i cant understand why folk cant even press a simple button to remove their deposit! hugs jan xx

David Fisher

Date: 9/30/2023 12:50:00 PM

Good one! Blame the plumber.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2023 3:56:00 AM

more like the bummer lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 2:45:00 AM

You touched a sore point. I had to mend my flushing lately but I used a pail with water. No nasty smell for me. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2023 2:08:00 AM

Ekk glad you got it sorted Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/27/2023 8:51:00 PM

Poo-r memory...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2023 6:34:00 AM

thanks Jo:-) you made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/27/2023 5:58:00 PM

I had a brother-in-law live with us once. He had UC. The toilet bowl looked like it had been hit with a poo shotgun blast.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/28/2023 6:34:00 AM

yuck! I guess the poor guy couldnt help it, but a bog brush by the side of the loo could prove a clue with what to do hugs Jan xx

Deb M

Date: 9/27/2023 2:40:00 PM

Gross but clever…P.Q strikes again!! I think you must have pure poop running through your veins Jan! Haha!!! keep plopping oops plodding away my friend!! Debx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 3:59:00 PM

lol thanks Deb:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/27/2023 2:12:00 PM

eeew! eegads! clever but not pleasant to think about :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 3:58:00 PM

lol thanks Sara, guess its a crap poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2023 1:57:00 PM

uggg, I hate seeing that crap. hahaha

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 3:58:00 PM

me too Andrea especially when there is a loo brush lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Di11y Da11y

Date: 9/27/2023 12:28:00 PM

I don't know how you do it Jan - I'm going to be blushing for a week having just written my entry :D

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 3:58:00 PM

thanks Dilly I just have a crap sense of humour I guess lol:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

Date: 9/27/2023 12:27:00 PM

i've enjoyed your jocular senryu dear poet, i'll not fartget it ;) much love, james

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 3:57:00 PM

thanks James x

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/27/2023 11:33:00 AM

Ewww Jan... potty poetry, butt funny at that ;-)

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/27/2023 4:14:00 PM

Why? I enjoy reading what you write, Jan. Don't let others bother you. Continue doing what you do...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 3:57:00 PM

not sure i even want to stay on the site atm but thats another story:-(

Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/27/2023 1:07:00 PM

A crown I hope you hold forever Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 11:52:00 AM

Despite what some folk think I am Queen of poop/ Limericks on Poetry soup I will not relinquish my diamante crown until I am no longer able to flush a poem out lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2023 11:25:00 AM

- .... definitely not me :))) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/27/2023 11:51:00 AM

lol thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx