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My first collab with PS !!!!! 

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/28/2018 11:17:00 AM
Haha, yes it was not good when some things were lost forever. They might be replaced, but not exactly.
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Date: 10/24/2018 10:01:00 PM
Ha! Love it! Clever, Arthur. Regards, V.....
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Date: 10/24/2018 12:14:00 AM
what??? (oh yeah, your commentary on Sunday's event!)
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Date: 10/23/2018 10:06:00 AM
The 'poof' is in the pudding or soup...well not said...^WW^
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Date: 10/22/2018 11:45:00 PM
My comment is ....
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Date: 10/22/2018 9:17:00 PM
Short and sweet!
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Date: 10/22/2018 8:04:00 PM
Deflated until it faded away. hmmm...blame it on PS.
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Date: 10/22/2018 6:47:00 PM
What happened? I read it earlier and it is epic. One to go down with the ages. Can knock down walls and build bridges... bravo
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Date: 10/22/2018 6:47:00 PM
ha ha ha I think you deserve POTD for your disappearing poem, made me breathless reading it lol:-) can i join in the collab - here is my poem *** ***** ***** ***** lol hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/22/2018 7:21:00 PM
Ah I know the poem was about a girl with a red balloon and it's gone pop and disappeared! looks like my poem wouldn't get through the filter lol lol:-)
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arthur vaso
Date: 10/22/2018 6:50:00 PM
I am giving Bansky a run for his money LOL