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POMPEII

I look at my work. I look down on the valley. I'm proud of its richness, of its green fertile fields, And each time I do, I can count up the tally. My sacrificial top's loss produces great yield. There's beauty in the valley, in its farms and trees. Morning fog gives it a mythical seduction. Yet though I remember how the people did flee. I take no fault for my fiery eruption. I, a Volcano. What can one really expect? My purpose is to scatter Earth's food from my cone. Terror of fiery flow calls for quick respect. Some townsfolk of Pompeii have been turned into stone.

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Date: 5/31/2025 5:16:00 PM
Hilda, this is such a powerful and original perspective--a volcano reflecting on its own legacy. I love the mix of awe and accountability in the voice, especially lines like “My purpose is to scatter Earth’s food from my cone”--it’s both destructive and life-giving. The tone walks that fine line between pride and detachment so well, and that ending... “turned into stone”--chilling and poetic. Brilliant work!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/31/2025 7:25:00 PM
Thank you. I feel that I should have mentioned its name. I don't know if it knows its name.
Date: 5/31/2025 1:20:00 AM
Long ago I've been to Pompeii. Great disaster. Tradition holds that they suffered the fate of Sodom. Glad to see you writing.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/31/2025 5:50:00 AM
You have a different view than my poem. I'd love to hear your version in a poem. Good to hear from you.
Date: 5/30/2025 6:33:00 PM
Good one Hilda. Like the perspective from the volcano
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/30/2025 8:17:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/30/2025 1:53:00 PM
Oh, Hilda, this is just breathtaking; your art is awe-inspiring. Your imagery depicts how these rampaging monsters have changed. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/30/2025 3:01:00 PM
Well thank you very much. You made me feel good today.
Date: 5/30/2025 9:10:00 AM
Hello Hilda, this is truly beautiful. An amazing piece. You have made me change how I think of these fiery monster's. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, my friend.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/30/2025 11:05:00 AM
Thank you. Enjoy the weekend.
Date: 5/30/2025 8:37:00 AM
Some folks blame nature for everything, when nature is just being nature, as intended. We know enough science now not to live so near a volcano...yet many of us do. Same thing with floods, etc.. You gave a volcano a brilliant chance to define itself -- well done!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/30/2025 11:04:00 AM
Your words brought a smile. Thank you.
Date: 5/30/2025 12:16:00 AM
Hilda, your poem is brilliant! Casting yourself as the volcano is such a bold choice—blending raw power with nurturing creation.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/30/2025 11:03:00 AM
Thank you. Your words are inspirational.
Date: 5/29/2025 8:18:00 PM
Wow and Whoa!! I really thoght this was a 'personification' of God at first. intriguing perspective here, Hilda. Thanks, gw
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/29/2025 8:29:00 PM
Thank you for reading it. The rhyme seemed to fall into place. I'm enjoying getting back into writing.
Date: 5/29/2025 1:39:00 PM
a very cool poem, hilda, with a very unusual way of looking at history. i really enjoyed this...
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/29/2025 2:49:00 PM
I'm honored that you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Date: 5/29/2025 12:30:00 PM
So interesting and beautifully composed, Hilda! Great imagery. :)
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/29/2025 2:47:00 PM
Thank you very much. I often think of the impartiality of nature.
Date: 5/29/2025 12:20:00 PM
Great personification!! I love how you mixed yourself into it.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/29/2025 2:46:00 PM
Yes. And I'm still covered in ash.

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