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Pollyanna Moment

I wake at the ascension of golden dawn to meditate on the morning's mystique To the sandy shoreline, I'm always drawn as the sun climbs over the mountain peak How calm the lake's water without a ripple Like a sheet of glass; is my mirrored reflection I seek its tranquil comfort as a babe, a nipple To me, this is a moment of sheer perfection It's hope of a budded flower before it blooms In solitude, I peer from rose-colored glasses I have no fear about what in darkness looms but too soon, my Pollyanna moment passes

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John Watt

Date: 9/6/2020 12:15:00 PM

Alas, those tranquil comforts are fleeting, but hopefully, so are the harsh moments. Nice portrayal of a mountaintop experience, Jenna ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/13/2020 4:38:00 AM

Thanks as always, for your encouraging comments, John.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2020 10:34:00 AM

Your pen did a wonderful "Pollyanna Moment." I love your line, "but too soon, my Pollyanna moment passes." Enjoy your day writing away.................

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/13/2020 4:38:00 AM

Thank you for your kind thoughts, Paula.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/18/2020 11:48:00 PM

Nicely written Jenna. The imagery was fantastic. Lovely piece thanks for posting...

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/19/2020 5:45:00 AM

Thank YOU for appreciating my lines, Michael.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2020 8:42:00 PM

what a sweet line Pollyanna moment. Creative and lovely poem.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2020 9:51:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/17/2020 3:57:00 PM

Splendidly captured moment! A beautiful write, Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2020 5:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/17/2020 2:04:00 PM

Lovely penning Jenna , showing g magical imagery throughout with grand rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2020 5:24:00 PM

I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for your comments.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/17/2020 12:47:00 PM

thanks for sharing your Pollyanna moment - gosh not heard that name since i was a child! lovely piece jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2020 5:23:00 PM

I saw that movie listing a few days ago, but have never seen it. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/17/2020 12:14:00 PM

This is fabulous. Excellent piece, spectacular writing. xomo

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2020 5:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mo.

John Gondolf

Date: 7/17/2020 12:02:00 PM

I too seek that sheer moment of perfection, unfortunately we have to wake up from the beautiful dreams and face reality. I enjoyed your Pollyanna moment, Jenna. Have a great day. Hugs, John

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2020 5:22:00 PM

It really is my favorite time of day; the hush before the rush of human traffic. Thanks for coming by, John.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/17/2020 9:40:00 AM

Extend that moment!! I saw a deal on Pollyanna glasses at Target just the other day: 50% off if you smile the entire time you are backed up in line waiting for the cashier. BB (Big Brother) is watching. LOL. Seriously, here's to happiness! Happy Friday, Jenna. Joy and Light, Gershon

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/17/2020 5:20:00 PM

Are the lenses rose colored? lol Thanks for your kind support, Gershon.