Jenna Logan Poet Rhyme

Pollyanna Moment

I wake at the ascension of golden dawn
to meditate on the morning's mystique
To the sandy shoreline, I'm always drawn
as the sun climbs over the mountain peak

How calm the lake's water without a ripple
Like a sheet of glass; is my mirrored reflection
I seek its tranquil comfort as a babe, a nipple
To me, this is a moment of sheer perfection

It's hope of a budded flower before it blooms
In solitude, I peer from rose-colored glasses
I have no fear about what in darkness looms
but too soon, my Pollyanna moment passes

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John Watt September 6, 2020 at 12:15 PM Alas, those tranquil comforts are fleeting, but hopefully, so are the harsh moments. Nice portrayal of a mountaintop experience, Jenna ~ John Jenna Logan October 13, 2020 at 4:38 AM Thanks as always, for your encouraging comments, John.

Paula Goldsmith July 26, 2020 at 10:34 AM Your pen did a wonderful "Pollyanna Moment." I love your line, "but too soon, my Pollyanna moment passes." Enjoy your day writing away................. Jenna Logan October 13, 2020 at 4:38 AM Thank you for your kind thoughts, Paula.

Michael Tor July 18, 2020 at 11:48 PM Nicely written Jenna. The imagery was fantastic. Lovely piece thanks for posting... Jenna Logan July 19, 2020 at 5:45 AM Thank YOU for appreciating my lines, Michael.

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2020 at 8:42 PM what a sweet line Pollyanna moment. Creative and lovely poem. Jenna Logan July 18, 2020 at 9:51 AM Thank you, Andrea.

Vijay Pandit July 17, 2020 at 3:57 PM Splendidly captured moment! A beautiful write, Jenna. Jenna Logan July 17, 2020 at 5:24 PM Thank you so much, Vijay.

Gordon Mcconnell July 17, 2020 at 2:04 PM Lovely penning Jenna , showing g magical imagery throughout with grand rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon Jenna Logan July 17, 2020 at 5:24 PM I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for your comments.

Jan Allison July 17, 2020 at 12:47 PM thanks for sharing your Pollyanna moment - gosh not heard that name since i was a child! lovely piece jenna:-) hugs Jan xx Jenna Logan July 17, 2020 at 5:23 PM I saw that movie listing a few days ago, but have never seen it. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 17, 2020 at 12:14 PM This is fabulous. Excellent piece, spectacular writing. xomo Jenna Logan July 17, 2020 at 5:22 PM Thank you so much, Mo.

John Gondolf July 17, 2020 at 12:02 PM I too seek that sheer moment of perfection, unfortunately we have to wake up from the beautiful dreams and face reality. I enjoyed your Pollyanna moment, Jenna. Have a great day. Hugs, John Jenna Logan July 17, 2020 at 5:22 PM It really is my favorite time of day; the hush before the rush of human traffic. Thanks for coming by, John.

Gershon Wolf July 17, 2020 at 9:40 AM Extend that moment!! I saw a deal on Pollyanna glasses at Target just the other day: 50% off if you smile the entire time you are backed up in line waiting for the cashier. BB (Big Brother) is watching. LOL. Seriously, here's to happiness! Happy Friday, Jenna. Joy and Light, Gershon Jenna Logan July 17, 2020 at 5:20 PM Are the lenses rose colored? lol Thanks for your kind support, Gershon.