Polaroid

No not the portrait when you were younger, my dear
Just a Polaroid snapshot at the beach that year
No earrings, no make-up, your hair was a mess
("So what? Got a problem? I couldn't care less!")
Brother-in-law behind you, mugging like a fool
Our nephew beside him, trying to look cool
You had a little patch of sand on your chin
But oh, what a smile; what a wide, joyful grin!
Living that moment, on a rollicking high
Complete in the present, no when and no why

(Now you're tucked away safe in our own special place
So you'll always stay with me when I tremble and ache
Sometimes I unfold you when I miss you too much
Press you tight to my forehead and weep at your touch)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:45 AM
Lovely, congrats on your win.
Barden Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 4:25 AM
This is an exquisitely wonderful Sonnet, Tim - just adore this write! Blessings and congrats on your win! :-)
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win, I love how you showed your memory through your write fabulous. Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Tim, beautifully sad sonnet...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Kimathi Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 5:25 AM
A very interesting piece indeed, Tim! Congrats for having it featured in the poetrysoup home page! ;-)
A  Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Tim, Congratulations, SKAT
Lane Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 5:30 AM
Well done, Tim. Congratulations.
Cheema Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:26 AM
Co grats Tim on your placement!
A   Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:38 PM
TIM, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
Posey Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Great recovery to a win, Tim. congratulations..... Jake
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 8:02 PM
Congratulations on your win for this heart breaking poem Tim. So touching.
Mehta Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Touchy and moving write, Congrats on the win, Tim
Manassian Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Tim....Oh...This just touched me so much! Sending you warm hugs and congratulations on your wonderful win. You are a kind caring sweetheart. Bless you.
Devonshire Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Old photos can surely resurrect happy times and the people with whom we shared them, Tim. This is an excellent sonnet and I especially admire the last two lines. If only relationships could last a lifetime. Congratulations on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 3:05 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Tim!
Ryerson Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 3:35 AM
Thanks to my new Facebook friend!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Really lovely and well worth the placing Tim xx
Onclaud Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 12:41 AM
love the sentimental side of you, tim.. wow.. rounds of applause to you!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 12:21 AM
I simply love this. Congratulations and happy writing. Love and prayers, Gina
Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:13 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's "3 Forms, 3 Themes" contest Tim. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 9:22 AM
So sincere! GREAT win..so glad you are back giving us your special gems. Congrads Light & Love
Richards Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 8:08 AM
So real...so beautifully written!!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
Williams Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Tim, congrats on your win..David
Johnson Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 12:11 AM
Beautiful writing Tim. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 10:22 PM
congrats 0n your second place win in the Broken Heart section of the contest Tim, you had some strong competition in this theme
Andresen Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 11:53 AM
This must be Favorite Poem for the "Broken heart" contest Tim - well done if you ask me. - Wish you good luck Tim !!! - Have a lovely weekend ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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