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Polaroid

No not the portrait when you were younger, my dear Just a Polaroid snapshot at the beach that year No earrings, no make-up, your hair was a mess ("So what? Got a problem? I couldn't care less!") Brother-in-law behind you, mugging like a fool Our nephew beside him, trying to look cool You had a little patch of sand on your chin But oh, what a smile; what a wide, joyful grin! Living that moment, on a rollicking high Complete in the present, no when and no why (Now you're tucked away safe in our own special place So you'll always stay with me when I tremble and ache Sometimes I unfold you when I miss you too much Press you tight to my forehead and weep at your touch)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/5/2017 10:45:00 AM
Lovely, congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/7/2017 4:25:00 AM
This is an exquisitely wonderful Sonnet, Tim - just adore this write! Blessings and congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 11/26/2016 4:39:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win, I love how you showed your memory through your write fabulous. Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/29/2016 10:32:00 AM
Tim, beautifully sad sonnet...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:25:00 AM
A very interesting piece indeed, Tim! Congrats for having it featured in the poetrysoup home page! ;-)
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Date: 12/8/2015 12:57:00 PM
Tim, Congratulations, SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 5:30:00 AM
Well done, Tim. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/8/2015 4:26:00 AM
Co grats Tim on your placement!
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:38:00 PM
TIM, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:34:00 PM
Great recovery to a win, Tim. congratulations..... Jake
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this heart breaking poem Tim. So touching.
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:19:00 AM
Touchy and moving write, Congrats on the win, Tim
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:01:00 AM
Tim....Oh...This just touched me so much! Sending you warm hugs and congratulations on your wonderful win. You are a kind caring sweetheart. Bless you.
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Date: 9/3/2014 6:11:00 AM
Old photos can surely resurrect happy times and the people with whom we shared them, Tim. This is an excellent sonnet and I especially admire the last two lines. If only relationships could last a lifetime. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/3/2014 3:05:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Tim!
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Date: 9/3/2014 3:35:00 AM
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Date: 9/3/2014 2:25:00 AM
Really lovely and well worth the placing Tim xx
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:41:00 AM
love the sentimental side of you, tim.. wow.. rounds of applause to you!
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:21:00 AM
I simply love this. Congratulations and happy writing. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 6/14/2012 5:13:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's "3 Forms, 3 Themes" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 9:22:00 AM
So sincere! GREAT win..so glad you are back giving us your special gems. Congrads Light & Love
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:08:00 AM
So real...so beautifully written!!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
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Date: 6/11/2012 2:25:00 AM
Tim, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:11:00 AM
Beautiful writing Tim. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/10/2012 10:22:00 PM
congrats 0n your second place win in the Broken Heart section of the contest Tim, you had some strong competition in this theme
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Date: 6/8/2012 11:53:00 AM
This must be Favorite Poem for the "Broken heart" contest Tim - well done if you ask me. - Wish you good luck Tim !!! - Have a lovely weekend ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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