Poison

Love is a potion, A dangerous poison, One days you make everthing so sweet, The next day i die by your feet.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2016 11:07:00 PM

HI, AMI, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ami Redzuan
Date: 1/11/2016 12:34:00 PM

Hello Linda,first thanks you for giving us a positif feedback in my wrote..I'm ami from malaysian, I was a writer and poet in this Malaysia. I can tell you from which country.Nice to meet you. I hope you enjoy the work that i write this

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 11:10:00 PM

Ami, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ami Redzuan
Date: 1/11/2016 12:27:00 PM

Hello SKAT, first thanks you for giving us a positif feedback in my wrote..I'm ami from malaysian, I was a writer and poet in this Malaysia. I can tell you from which country.Nice to meet you. I hope you enjoy the work that i write this

Bo Lanier

Date: 1/1/2016 7:15:00 PM

nicely written - i liked it.

Ami Redzuan
Date: 1/11/2016 12:23:00 PM

I'm ami from malaysian, I was a writer and poet in this Malaysia. I can tell you from which country.Thank you for giving us a positive feedback..nice to meet.