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Beset with trials, challenging faith’s might heart faces quandary toward peace-flight while being checked of disposition poise falling out against equilibrium height. Reaching forth welcoming steadfastness’ quay I quiver; thus, from sailing angst I pray bouncing back, moving on from failure pain clinging to my Anchor along the way. With revival perfume of sweetness scent my grateful spirit, propped from being bent confesses midst humbling earnest penance purging selfishness for service ascent. Smiting false humility --- oh, quaint pride that’s vain boasting my soul does try to hide I yield fantasized platinum awards striving to please God; in His love abide*.
*John 15:10 If ye keep my commandments, ye shall abide in my love; even as I have kept my Father's commandments, and abide in his love. February 18, 2021 3rd place, "Mind Your P's and Q's" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Michelle Faulkner; judged on 3/6/2021.
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:16:00 AM
Beautiful Beata. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/8/2021 4:19:00 AM
Wonderful write Beata, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/6/2021 4:20:00 PM
You wove the words in excellently Beata:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:29:00 AM
Beata, your use of the required words is skillfully done, especially 'revival perfume' and 'quaint pride' - however I do think, out of respect for those who don't share your religious belief, you shouldn't include the Bible quote, at least not for poems you enter in contests, but never the less it is a lovely poem, congratulations and thank you for entering~
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