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Sotto Poet's Pen Something To This Prompt Contest

Poet's Desire

Blank paper lays scattered by the fire 
as evening churns my gut again ,
below my bosom ...fingers knead
where collage of thoughts grate,
where knuckles hold lines and assault
the senses...to inspire new beliefs.

Sometimes verses write themselves 
before thev feel the need to soar --
and somehow mind-shift is realized 
when pages turn into the voice of change ;
that pure expression bleed in my eyes
 where fire throws cravings to wake hearts asleep.

So hands etch on,  smoke dragons ...slay!
And lines speak a language of intuition 
 their texture igniting  life's pure intent-- 
dragons droop and creep between the edges 
of a page...as morning slowly grips in a corner 
of fresh vision... of word- chimes tingling 
 nudging a reader' s thought __that  I qive a shrill 
and tremble on; 
upon sheets to writhe delirious, igniting one
 to gulp my  poem ... savoring dawn.
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Peranteau Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 5:30 AM
dang nette....i've been watch'n you grow...(((you are the quintessential poetess)))...when i read uv accolades bestow'd 'to thuh poets here; unintentionally, my tugz at particular writerz tuh spill mine critique(truly accoladez uv adoration)by-thuh-by, mine admirez yourn faith ') ty for thuh read....much love
Anaya Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Congrats Nette! Dramatic & passionate--especially using fire to illustrate the intensity of your desire, wow.
Maverick Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 2:27 PM
Its all worth it (sometimes') a gamut of Choices we must run.' Nette Well done.'
Banerjee Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 8:08 AM
Breathtaking penmanship. Congratulations on the win, Nette :)
Lawless Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:42 PM
The poet as dragon slayer, tamer, and ultimate victor in the muses medley of madness. Nicely done Nette
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