Poets' Creed - We Are Building Castles In the Sky

We are building castles in the sky
with expectations higher than high!
Those gray clouds above have got to go.
We only choose to see a rainbow.

We’ll have our Camelot before we die.
We are building castles in the sky.
Don’t tell us this is just a crazy dream.
Love’s strength is like the stars above that gleam.

Radiating joy, we are beams of sun.
Happiness we extend to everyone.
We are building castles in the sky.
Join with us; the time of peace is nigh.

We are visionaries and we see
with eyes of magic. We are Poetry.
Imagine it! Free your mind and fly!
We are building castles in the sky.

Written Dec. 24, 2016 
Inspired by Steven Henderson's  Poetry Contest: Building Castles in the Sky 

With a nod to the songs of an era of peace and love: Lennon’s "Imagine", Beatles’ "Here Comes the Sun", Oliver’s "Good Morning Starshine", Louie Armstrong’s "What a Wonderful World", 5th Dimension’s "Aquarius/Let the Sun Shine In", Jackie DaShannon’s "What the World Needs Now", as well as Olivia Newton-John’s "Magic" and the classic oldie" Somewhere Over the Rainbow."

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Date: 1/4/2017 6:19:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on another fine win for your inspiring poem! I love the songs "of an era of peace and love" that you applaud as poetic "castle builders of the sky"! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea :)
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:06:00 PM
Congrats well done great poem x
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Date: 1/4/2017 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea..
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Date: 1/4/2017 7:46:00 AM
I'm back to congratulate you Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:25:00 AM
You are poetry indeed. Somewhere over the rainbow. Wow. Do you know story, how Eva Cassidy became famous in the UK with that song? Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations for winning with such a profound poem. Huggsss & love...Afzal.
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Date: 1/3/2017 4:25:00 PM
Optimistic and inspiring. Like the references at the end. Congratulations on your win Andrea! :-)
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Date: 12/27/2016 3:50:00 PM
Love this creation my friend. Positive, on the mark and inspiring verses to remind us that poetry is in our collective souls.. A pleasure to read today..
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Date: 12/26/2016 4:49:00 PM
Magical verse here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/26/2016 2:29:00 PM
I loved your ending stanza Andrea. I am a fan of all the songs you mention. I hope this poem does really well in the contest. ; ) 7
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Date: 12/26/2016 3:16:00 AM
Inspiring and uplifting. A monumental poem dearest, Andrea! A seven!
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Date: 12/25/2016 8:48:00 PM
A mesmerizing poem my dear friend, Andrea! What else can I say?-Two thumbs up! Good luck in the contest although I think you don't need it. Thanks a lot for sharing. Hope you've a Very Wonderful and Blessed Christmas with your family! Many hugs! Again, thank you so much for your greetings and the very beautiful card and my placement in your contest. God bless you always! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/25/2016 1:16:00 PM
You're the best Andrea ! I love the part that say's " We only choose to see rainbows ". Happiness is a choice ! My soup mail is turned on if you ever want to send a message. Merry Christmas Andrea !
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Date: 12/25/2016 12:15:00 PM
...each word a building block reaching ever higher...Nicely done Andrea
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Date: 12/25/2016 11:49:00 AM
Crafted like the master you are! Well Done! Just a superb quatern! .... Merry Christmas to you and your family, Andrea! ...Fran
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Date: 12/25/2016 8:20:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading this! Like always.
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Date: 12/25/2016 5:14:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I loved this. And Ioved the songs too! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and your family: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/25/2016 1:43:00 AM
Whao! This is incredible! I am glad to be a poet. A 7 soup rating for you Andrea
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Date: 12/24/2016 11:02:00 PM
Very good girl good luck in the contest Hugs
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Date: 12/24/2016 9:40:00 PM
Beautifully penned Andrea...Another song that comes to mind is 'crystal blue persuasion'...hugs
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