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Poets Anthem-----1 of Three Vs & Chorus

V: the lights are dim as our bodies collide we coincide sweetly to you i abide our bodies flow with ease giving me incentive I'll drop to my knees feel my strength as you caress my back listen to my lyrics as i recite this track i love it when your body tenses my touch sends a shock wave through all of your senses flaunting your stuff, what a big butt I'm down to you boo I'm yours for the taking you'll see by my convictions that I'm hardly faking our life together has me in a state of felicity I'm all for a life of constant consistency playing tunes of passion and romance whenever in danger i will take a stance put my life on the line because you are mine C: i dream in the future, us having a kid at that time living together in the same crib like a prisoner taking a shiv that's how i feel when we're apart when we met i felt that spark fell in love, you made your mark i dread the day if we were to part lets get rid of these thoughts we are together forever

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Date: 3/12/2010 7:07:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week .. Constance
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Date: 3/11/2010 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Jared, on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Jared. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:23:00 AM
enjoyed, congrats on the featured poem!!
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:36:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week JP.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/7/2010 8:17:00 PM
Congrats Mr. J. on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. a great choice to share with us all... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:44:00 AM
I see your notion, and love lotion, have a good one, Jared, Moses
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:11:00 AM
this is beautiful--charma
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