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Poetry Soup One can learn how to write better in a group  Emotions about words will jump through a hoop  Traveling through my finger tips doing a loop to loop  Reading and writing is what I do to recoup  Yearning to be better each day will make me regroup.  Special friendships are made                                                      Over time I prayed          Under your time and aid  Poems come from many words we played.  Date Written:8/10/2022 3 Place Note: Name Rhyme POETRY SOUP BEYOND ITS NAME Poetry            Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Date: 12/11/2022 3:14:00 PM
Just found this. Congrats on your win.Thanks for reading, my Miss Kitty.Where is the op oem you mentioned?
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:11:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations.....
Date: 10/31/2022 12:27:00 AM
I love the way you brought it all together and so true about making new friends especially here on Poetry Soup where we spill our emotions with words. God Bless you! Brigitte Pace
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:09:00 PM
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Date: 9/25/2022 9:58:00 PM
"One can learn how to write better in a group" - This, indeed, is a great benefit of this site. Congratulations on your placement.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:08:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations.....
Date: 9/25/2022 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your Win, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:06:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations........................
Date: 9/25/2022 9:11:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, and for sharing your beautiful tribute to PS. God bless you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:03:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations........................
Date: 8/30/2022 4:43:00 PM
We definitely meet some unique friends here Paula! Hey it may just be my screen, but the "O" sentence in 'soup' is much further over than where the other sentences start.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:01:00 PM
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Date: 8/27/2022 1:11:00 AM
Very beautifully penned.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit and kind words. Glad you like my Poetry Soup write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/19/2022 8:01:00 AM
Nice entry for the contest, my friend. This is a blessed place. Hugs, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/19/2022 9:59:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like this write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/16/2022 9:54:00 PM
Love this one Paula you have written exactly how I feel of the Soup... Blessings my Dear...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2022 9:34:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you love my "Poetry Soup" write. I really enjoyed writing this Name Rhyme write. I just said my feelings. Soup is a wonderful place for writes to write and to learn. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/16/2022 10:26:00 AM
I hope everyone reads and takes to heart your second line, Paula. The best way to learn to write a well-written poem is to read lots...and lots...and lots of well-written poems. And, fortunately, this community contains a wealth of those. BOL in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2022 9:27:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit and for your BOL. Glad you enjoyed my Soup write. We can learn from this wonderful/great poetic community of writers. A place where we can be encouraged and helped along our way. One can also find wonderful friendships. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/15/2022 12:07:00 AM
Inspiring and making one feel proud of being part of Poetry Soup. Dear Paula, I concur with your opinions about this great Poetic community ! All the Best !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 11:09:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this Soup write. Yes, we are in a wonderful/great poetic community of writers. A place where we can learn and be encouraged. One can find wonderful friendships here. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/13/2022 9:39:00 PM
What a lovely tribute to the most wonderful community binded by poetry as we are sailing in the same boat towards the same direction ... Silpika
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like this true write. Yes, we are in the same boat towards the same direction as we write away. Many wonderful friendships are make here. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/13/2022 2:30:00 AM
This is truly creative and true, thank you for sharing your beautiful heart, have a blessed day dear Paul xo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this creative and true write. Many wonderful friendships are make here. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/12/2022 6:27:00 PM
Indeed...Special friendships are made.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:24:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, many wonderful friendships are make here. Wonderful friendships from all over the world. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/12/2022 11:06:00 AM
Lighthearted fun. An enjoyable Acrostic.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 11:58:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this Name Rhyme write. It was fun to write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/10/2022 8:28:00 PM
Your acrostic conveys how beneficial this poetry site is to all of us Paula. Lovely! Blessings xxoo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 11:55:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like my write. Yes, this is a great site for the writers. I know it is enjoyed by all. Hope you are now OK. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/10/2022 6:59:00 PM
I like how you rhymed your lines, Paula. They are fun, gently funny, and inspiring. Thanks, gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 11:53:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like my Name Rhyme Poetry Soup write. Yes, they are fun to write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................
Date: 8/10/2022 4:27:00 PM
Very nice Paula. I enjoyed this :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like my Poetry Soup write. it was fun to write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

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