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Poetry Soup

Poetry Soup                                                                                                                                                                                                                 One can learn how to write better in a group   
Emotions about words will jump through a hoop                                     
Traveling through my finger tips doing a loop to loop                             
Reading and writing is what I do to recoup                                                 
Yearning to be better each day will make me regroup.                                                       

                                                                                               
Special friendships are made                                                                                                          Over time I prayed                                                                       
Under your time and aid                                                                                                                                        
Poems come from many words we played. 


Date Written:8/10/2022  

3 Place                                                         

Note: Name Rhyme                                                                

POETRY SOUP BEYOND ITS NAME Poetry                                                      
Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/2/2024 9:25:00 AM

"3 Place ~ POETRY SOUP" Date Written:8/10/2022

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 12/11/2022 3:14:00 PM

Just found this. Congrats on your win.Thanks for reading, my Miss Kitty.Where is the op oem you mentioned?

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:11:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations.....

Brigitte Pace

Date: 10/31/2022 12:27:00 AM

I love the way you brought it all together and so true about making new friends especially here on Poetry Soup where we spill our emotions with words. God Bless you! Brigitte Pace

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:09:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me.......

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/25/2022 9:58:00 PM

"One can learn how to write better in a group" - This, indeed, is a great benefit of this site. Congratulations on your placement.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:08:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations.....

Eve Roper

Date: 9/25/2022 6:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your Win, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:06:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations........................

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/25/2022 9:11:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for your participation, and for sharing your beautiful tribute to PS. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:03:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me and for your congratulations........................

FJ Thomas

Date: 8/30/2022 4:43:00 PM

We definitely meet some unique friends here Paula! Hey it may just be my screen, but the "O" sentence in 'soup' is much further over than where the other sentences start.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:01:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/27/2022 1:11:00 AM

Very beautifully penned.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2022 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit and kind words. Glad you like my Poetry Soup write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Bill Baker

Date: 8/19/2022 8:01:00 AM

Nice entry for the contest, my friend. This is a blessed place. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/19/2022 9:59:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like this write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Michael Tor

Date: 8/16/2022 9:54:00 PM

Love this one Paula you have written exactly how I feel of the Soup... Blessings my Dear...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2022 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you love my "Poetry Soup" write. I really enjoyed writing this Name Rhyme write. I just said my feelings. Soup is a wonderful place for writes to write and to learn. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/16/2022 10:26:00 AM

I hope everyone reads and takes to heart your second line, Paula. The best way to learn to write a well-written poem is to read lots...and lots...and lots of well-written poems. And, fortunately, this community contains a wealth of those. BOL in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2022 9:27:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit and for your BOL. Glad you enjoyed my Soup write. We can learn from this wonderful/great poetic community of writers. A place where we can be encouraged and helped along our way. One can also find wonderful friendships. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2022 12:07:00 AM

Inspiring and making one feel proud of being part of Poetry Soup. Dear Paula, I concur with your opinions about this great Poetic community ! All the Best !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 11:09:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this Soup write. Yes, we are in a wonderful/great poetic community of writers. A place where we can learn and be encouraged. One can find wonderful friendships here. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Silpika Kalita

Date: 8/13/2022 9:39:00 PM

What a lovely tribute to the most wonderful community binded by poetry as we are sailing in the same boat towards the same direction ... Silpika

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:28:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like this true write. Yes, we are in the same boat towards the same direction as we write away. Many wonderful friendships are make here. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/13/2022 2:30:00 AM

This is truly creative and true, thank you for sharing your beautiful heart, have a blessed day dear Paul xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:26:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this creative and true write. Many wonderful friendships are make here. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/12/2022 6:27:00 PM

Indeed...Special friendships are made.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2022 9:24:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, many wonderful friendships are make here. Wonderful friendships from all over the world. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/12/2022 11:06:00 AM

Lighthearted fun. An enjoyable Acrostic.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 11:58:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you enjoyed this Name Rhyme write. It was fun to write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/10/2022 8:28:00 PM

Your acrostic conveys how beneficial this poetry site is to all of us Paula. Lovely! Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 11:55:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like my write. Yes, this is a great site for the writers. I know it is enjoyed by all. Hope you are now OK. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/10/2022 6:59:00 PM

I like how you rhymed your lines, Paula. They are fun, gently funny, and inspiring. Thanks, gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2022 11:53:00 AM

Thanks for your wonderful visit. Glad you like my Name Rhyme Poetry Soup write. Yes, they are fun to write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away................