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Poetry Portfolio--My Sister's Bubbles

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This is poem #9 of my Poetry Portfolio for class.

Floating above my hand outstretched Is a bubble--a reflective rainbow Blowing from a wand in her fingers Belonging to my one baby sister She flies around, shouting all about Bubbles float beyond my eyes Seeing them lift above her head While our parents laugh at the sight Bringing their eyes upon her Their interest in her every move Running around with the dog Showering bubbles around their heads They try to hold each one in their hands While they levitate above mine Imagining their invincibility towards My sister’s shrill voice, screeching Along the yard like a siren, blaring Without an emergency, save my ego As the last bubble pops in my hand Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/21/2017 6:31:00 AM
Oh bubbles, brings out the kid in us even to this day. I love how you have brought this delightful scene to a close with that last effervescent 'pop' in your hand. Brilliant poem Russell....Maria
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Date: 8/21/2017 5:56:00 AM
Oh, so charming and whimsical and joyous - this reminds me so of wonderful times with my older sister and brother! We were not allowed to fight, so we became close and still are, and we had some amazing adventures together. This takes me back to such a time, sublime - I love it! Thanks for sharing, my friend! :-)
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Date: 8/20/2017 12:42:00 PM
effervescent write, dear russel... this gives the simple bubbles a sense of excitement through your engaging lines especially the last line... you are on a roll!..huggs
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:38:00 AM
I think you put in one earlier like this one that I enjoyed? This finalized version is just perfect. I can see it, feel it, hear it. Very well done! You have brought the scene to the reader :)
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:28:00 AM
Well depicted Russell--I can see the bubbles floating!
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