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This is poem #1 of my Poetry Portfolio for class.

White fan blows quietly Wacky USB dive sits near Magnifying reading glasses And some worn out pens reflect Two puppies on a worn mouse pad Placed under an intense mouse The recorder and order of events Of my computer, eight years used Occupies the space front and center Mobile desk holds all objects said Moves on maple wood floor I sit, I work, I laugh, I entertain On my desk of multiple things Russell Sivey

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/20/2017 6:57:00 AM

I see your desk and the multiple things--well depicted!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/20/2017 6:50:00 AM

I can picture this, sitting at a computer Russell. Thank God you can use a computer to get your writing out here for all of us to see and enjoy. Thank you for sharing your portfolio! :)