Sara Kendrick Poet Ottava rima

Poetry Internet Love Affair

A new love who comes to me underground
Over hill even swims mighty river
Under the ocean waves to me he bounds
Joy to my meager life he is giver
Giver of joy, warm fuzzy feelings wait sound
Of email ding_note it will  deliver
Disappointment comes when no news from love
Waiting for romantic poetry from  dove

When with him, his loving emails are pearls
The tension melts and our spirits entwine
Can't wait to meet face to face soon we'll twirl
When alone all my heart does is to pine
It pines for you alone _your  hair in curls
When with you I know I'll have heart that shines
Email ding open what a lovely gift 
He is coming on midnight plane_heart lifts

Soon be in his arms not XOXO on paper
Watching and waiting at the airport sigh
Over intercom excitement damper
Call to come to information desk_cry
Cry, cry, and cry _terrorist did tamper
Won't see love after all spirit bone dry
Heartbreak agony ripping my heart out
Can't see for tears flowing without a doubt

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Caryl Muzzey December 29, 2010 at 5:06 PM Very sad but I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway December 11, 2010 at 2:06 PM goose bumps Sara... a remarkable story of love and loss. I felt like i was on a roller coaster ride. beautifully done but so sad.

James Peranteau December 10, 2010 at 8:17 AM I was rolling with this one dear poet, until your last stanza...it stopped me in my poetic love bursting tracks !.. which to me makes a great write Sara...a great write, though sad the ending! much love, james

Fabiyas M V December 10, 2010 at 5:29 AM It is current love steeped in deep passion,Sara.Very interstingly,I read it.I think real experience inspired you write this.Love is loved by everyone.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink December 10, 2010 at 4:04 AM SWEET AND EMOTIONAL, AN ELERGY LIKE CANDY. LOVE, LIGHTENING INK.

Skat A December 9, 2010 at 10:14 PM Very interesting SARA, sad as well*SKAT

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2010 at 7:13 PM HOw sad, Sara, it reminds me of that country song where a woman is waiting to marry a soldier and then she is stood up at the alter because he was killed overseas. I sure wish my mind remembered titles!! anyway, very interesting write. Best of luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Cecil Hickman December 9, 2010 at 6:48 PM truly an emotional and sad poem with the ending,,I sincerely hope this was not for real,,if it was all my heartfelt thoughts are with you and your loss,,I hope and pray that this was just your muse,,and I do want to Thank You for all your visits to my word and for all your words that you have left behind,,,Blessings..cecil

Margeret Bailey December 9, 2010 at 4:01 PM Lovely but sad poem indeed. Thanks.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 9, 2010 at 3:08 PM SOUP MAIL..Sara..

Audrey Haick December 9, 2010 at 1:45 PM It seems I missed the begining but this is very sad Sara. So relevant to today with home-grown terrorist in our midst. Love is never loss though..but it's just my opinion. Love, Audrey

Diane Locksley December 9, 2010 at 1:44 PM You went from happiness to sadness so quickly when you heard the announcement, Sara. A timely poem right now as we all fear terrorism. Good luck in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire December 9, 2010 at 1:07 PM Oh no, I wasn't prepared for the sad ending, Sara, but I'm sure there have been lots of loved ones left crying at airports when terrorists take action. A beautifully written poem with such a sad ending. I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud December 9, 2010 at 12:36 PM a rare treat from beginning to end, sara.. very contemporary and so alive in mood and tionality.. best winning wishes in the contest... thumbs up! huggs, nette

Diane Locksley December 9, 2010 at 9:45 AM I want to know how this story ends!

Carolyn Devonshire December 9, 2010 at 9:29 AM Gee, it's frustrating waiting for the "Giver of joy" to send a heartwarming email, Sara. Let me know when your poem is finished; I can't wait to see if he sends the much-awaited email! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 9, 2010 at 7:44 AM Expressions of sincere luv and intense feeling Sara.. awaiting the continuation my friend. with luv.. SOUP MAIL..

Sharon Ruebel December 9, 2010 at 7:28 AM Hello Sara, Will be waiting, love the beginning Have a wonderful day! As Always, Shar