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Poetry In Motion

~~~ The new sun rose and so we ran twisting and turning with you hand in hand with giggles and laughter we sang songs of love we forged deep inside the forest of lust deep in the trees where no-one could see our cinnamon flesh entwined in belief and as the clouds rolled above the tall scape light rain came to fall upon your soft face and in a bright flash two souls danced as one twisting and turning we drown in pure love ~~~ 8/5/2016

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/29/2016 9:16:00 PM

Wow Rick, each line flows right into the next with ease. Lovely verse, all do respect I feel it should've placed higher...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/6/2016 8:34:00 AM

I love the use of brevity when the ability exist to speak volumes through its use. You have that ability and it rolls, leaps and tantalizes the reader in this seductive poem - it did me! CayCay

Rick Parise
Date: 8/6/2016 10:08:00 PM

Sweet!!!Thank you!!!I'm headed to read a bit of your creative talent. Love & Light

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/5/2016 4:47:00 PM

This is lovely Rick. Nothing like reminiscing about a past love.

Rick Parise
Date: 8/6/2016 10:09:00 PM

Thanks Daniel....