Poetry for Me

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5/20/2024 for Why Did I Become a Poet Poetry Contest sponsored by Jay Narain

Poetry is a way to see - My soul, Everything inside of me - The whole, And share it all with thee. Poetry is a way to see - The world, Everything the Big Bang's spree Once hurled, And bring it inside me.

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/26/2024 7:56:00 PM

Seeing one's soul, seeing the world... Very beautiful lines on poetry. Congratulations!

David Crandall
Date: 5/26/2024 7:59:00 PM

Thanks Christuraj - I appreciate your words!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/21/2024 1:54:00 PM

An incredible poem that flows well and has an ending burst of futuristic pondering. This poem is simply beautiful.

David Crandall
Date: 5/21/2024 7:31:00 PM

Wow, thank you Hilda!

Tom Woody

Date: 5/20/2024 5:39:00 PM

We're glad you're here David

David Crandall
Date: 5/20/2024 7:36:00 PM

Thanks Tom!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/20/2024 4:31:00 PM

I agree...poetry is a way to see beyond one's eyes. Nicely done for the contest! Have a splendid day, Sara

David Crandall
Date: 5/20/2024 7:36:00 PM

Thanks, Sara! Have a great evening!

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 5/20/2024 1:29:00 PM

I love the ending. Nice climax.

David Crandall
Date: 5/20/2024 1:42:00 PM

Thanks Benjamin - glad you liked it!