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Poetry Dance

thoughts twirl waltzing words composing beautiful dance my step falls behind ... CayCay Jennings May 7, 2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/18/2016 3:33:00 PM

Congrats CayCay, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2016 4:28:00 PM

So pleased to be back with congratulations, CayCay...well done!:) Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2016 5:24:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, CayCay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/14/2016 6:54:00 PM

CayCay, congratulations on your nice placement in the 'short form' contest. Nice imagery! Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2016 5:59:00 PM

Utterly enchanting, Caycay. Next time keep the beginning words no caps! this probably would have been a second placer!! I love how you got a great twist at the last line. Congrats, my friend.

Edlynn Nau

Date: 5/10/2016 9:13:00 PM

EXCELLENT! In a nutshell--A7

Dan Cwiak

Date: 5/9/2016 12:01:00 PM

Wonderful gliding through the Senryu form, CayCay. I only hope I can get my step back. Keep Smilin' !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2016 1:27:00 AM

ohh, i am in awe of your poetic talent, cay.. the ending was powerful!.. love and huggs.. it's new moon!

David Mohn

Date: 5/7/2016 8:42:00 PM

Terrific CayCay :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2016 3:37:00 PM

I love this one, CayCay....that end line is just what the doctor ordered! ~ Regards // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/7/2016 7:23:00 AM

Fantastic imagery! A seven dear, CayCay!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/7/2016 1:09:00 AM

Beautiful!