Poetry Dance

thoughts twirl waltzing words composing beautiful dance ~ my pen falls behind
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Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Congrats CayCay, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Callus Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 4:28 PM
So pleased to be back with congratulations, CayCay...well done!:) Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:24 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poems, CayCay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 6:54 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your nice placement in the 'short form' contest. Nice imagery! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:59 PM
Utterly enchanting, Caycay. Next time keep the beginning words no caps! this probably would have been a second placer!! I love how you got a great twist at the last line. Congrats, my friend.
Nau Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 9:13 PM
EXCELLENT! In a nutshell--A7
Cwiak Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Wonderful gliding through the Senryu form, CayCay. I only hope I can get my step back. Keep Smilin' !
Onclaud Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:27 AM
ohh, i am in awe of your poetic talent, cay.. the ending was powerful!.. love and huggs.. it's new moon!
Mohn Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Terrific CayCay :)
Callus Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 3:37 PM
I love this one, CayCay....that end line is just what the doctor ordered! ~ Regards // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 7:23 AM
Fantastic imagery! A seven dear, CayCay!
Vaso Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 1:09 AM
Beautiful!
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