Poetry

everyone has a little love to give a reason to live. a light to share feelings to spare words that dare moments of dispare a minute to care a moment to share a time to declair and a time to be there and here is our love to give our reason to live what we share the feelings ensnared words that declair moments that we stare with bravery that dares is that pride in there it is'n t property but priority that season the things with in how are we to tell the world about our world within give it spin and make it rhyme give them reason to laugh or cry as the subject passes by and if they read it again and again your fortune will be time without end

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/1/2012 5:17:00 PM

How are we to tell the world about our world within" Such wonderful though in this part. I loved the whole poem but those two lines speke to me. I've found out you are T.S. and not situation, you've been fooling me for too long! :)

Date: 2/1/2012 8:04:00 PM

T.S. The Situation. But you can call me Situation.

Angela Solis

Date: 3/6/2011 4:16:00 AM

Really well done.. Great poetry..

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/18/2011 7:59:00 AM

great poetry, i second it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2011 6:03:00 AM

Poetry is life's breath to a writer and lover of art Situation.. a wonderful write on the assets of being a poet and enjoying one's work and sharing the gift with so many .. enjoyed and thankxx for your awesome comments on my "Triolette" featured poem luv..

Joy Wellington

Date: 2/13/2011 7:41:00 PM

Thanks for giving and sharing. appreciate your comments. Blessings Joy (Jew)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/12/2011 11:31:00 PM

Great poem TS. Thanks for your comments

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2011 9:36:00 AM

Hi TS, the convention was just a dream but many of us have discussed how great it would be for Soup members to get together. The main problem is that there are so many Soupers from other countries and choosing a convenient location for all seems impossible. Best wishes, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 2/12/2011 1:16:00 AM

Simply Lovely. Lainie

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/11/2011 5:22:00 PM

Despite some misspelled words in this presentation, it has some good rhyme and descriptiveness.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2011 1:42:00 PM

Poets have a special way of impacting readers, TS. When I'm down, I sign on to the Soup and look for the humorous poems. They really do help. And sometimes the sad ones help as well, because we know there are others who are facing similar struggles. Nicely said. Best wishes, Carolyn

Lisa Lee

Date: 2/11/2011 7:59:00 AM

Thanks so much for your kind words...but, really yours is so Awesome! Great Work!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2011 7:41:00 AM

Good one..Reasons to write and share with the world.Thanks for the kind reviews of my work...Sara

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/11/2011 7:40:00 AM

This is a fine and fun read, The Situation! Close ups on mood and origin of"Poetry". Blown away by your notions; swept up and transported by the rhyme. Thank you! Take care...Keep well.. Mikki

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/11/2011 7:13:00 AM

I think that is what poetry is about making them laugh or cry mostly making them feel. Enjoyed the poem this morning. God Bless Phyl