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fickle love and not... torturing my mind running yes, no, start, stop-tease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/8/2011 1:22:00 PM
you tickle my poetic desires Doris, with this sweet little piece that you have penned.good to see you out and about again.
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Date: 1/7/2011 11:50:00 AM
Interesting senryu Doris, hope you will have a good weekend ;)
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Date: 1/7/2011 8:06:00 AM
Excellent Senryu, Doris, enjoye the read! Have a great new year!...Gert
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:58:00 PM
Hi Doris would not except, the first comment so posted again and both were validated, so you got double ratings, good i'm glad. Harry
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:54:00 PM
Last word here in this senryu says everything, Doris, you are so astute. love your poems. Harry
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:53:00 PM
Last word here in this senryu says everything, Doris, you are so astute. love your poems. Harry
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Date: 1/6/2011 7:43:00 AM
wonderful write,Doris.Sweet flow of emotions I felt
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:30:00 AM
Once the gift is open it is like Pandora's Box..One just can't stop writing those lines..May your gift flow onto the pages of soup continuously...Mom
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:28:00 AM
Doris, you must be a poet machine. Keep cranking them out. This terse verse tells it like it is. Thanks for commenting on my poems. You ask if I'm a teacher. Other than Sunday school teaching I'm not. I've conducted poetry classes and led seminars on occasion.
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:21:00 AM
Facing many dilemmas, Doris
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Date: 1/6/2011 5:39:00 AM
this is a wonderful poem
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Date: 1/5/2011 7:42:00 PM
interesting Doris and unique in it's style and presentation.. luv the start, stop - tease line.. awesome luv..
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