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Poetry- the Sap of Life

“Poetry is eternal graffiti written in the heart of everyone.” — Lawrence Ferlinghetti
When starlings were swimming in the azure lake When bats and owls began their nocturnal ride When all the Earth under a dark blanket lay My Muse, like a sweet temptress, came to me To set this captive free, to give free rein to my fancy She sang into my ears the lovely strains of a placid melody, Bathing me in sheer delight, creating in me a passion too intense To articulate my disjointed thoughts into vibrant melodies of beauty Soon fireflies of thoughts came flitting like bees around a looted honeycomb In a butterfly net, I trapped them all clustering together in a clumsy heap Making my darkened zone bright with little arcs of shimmering light I placed them carefully in an ordered strain, word after word, In meaningful sequence, fashioning them into a beautiful symphony When your Muse comes knocking at your door Delay her not, but let her in and go for a merry ride with her There, let her magic wand kiss and caress you From head to foot and all over awakening your fancy From deep slumber, that songs of passion are born from you, Gushing forth in streams of honeyed dew, For poetry is a life cherishing force! Nov. 23.2022 ~Placed Third~ Poetry is a Life Cherishing Force Contest Sponsor – Sotto Poet
Re submitted for Brian Strand Contest. No.1170

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Date: 12/4/2022 4:03:00 AM
If only everyone would have a muse as precious and giving as yours, we'd all be in seventh heaven dear Valsa, your words resonate with me, congrats on your win, love and prayers, for health and prosperity xo
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Valsa George
Date: 12/4/2022 4:44:00 AM
I feel your Muse is more giving than mine. Glad for your interesting observation Rose. Thanks a lot .
Date: 12/3/2022 6:51:00 AM
Amazing and great picture of poetry you've painted well by your creative words my dear friend Valsa. So beautiful! i enjoyed everyline. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Goes to my fave. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 12/4/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot Len for your sweet comment ! Glad you have made it your FAVE. Feel honored !
Date: 12/2/2022 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest, Valsa. Well deserved, and would place even higher if you kept the same proposed quote. Blessings dear friend
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Valsa George
Date: 12/4/2022 4:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear friend. I do such mistakes due to carelessness. However I enjoyed taking part in your contest
Date: 12/1/2022 8:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Many blessings to you my friend
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Valsa George
Date: 12/4/2022 4:38:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Eve.... ! stay blessed.
Date: 12/1/2022 12:12:00 PM
- A wonderful description of feelings, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 12/4/2022 4:38:00 AM
Thanks lot dear Smile ..... ! Love and hugs !
Date: 11/24/2022 8:48:00 AM
Well penned my friend. Have not communicated for a while, but finding spare time with a demanding business is hectic. A very different approach to the creation of poetry and your muse playing a part in it all. Very enjoyable poem, Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/24/2022 10:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Jenny ! I too have been at fault, never getting time to read your poems, though I enjoy your poems and comments. So both of us can excuse ! Thanks for your lovely, much cherished comment !
Date: 11/23/2022 10:17:00 AM
The pursuit of knowledge is always worth one's while! Aloha!
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Date: 11/23/2022 6:04:00 PM
A life spent in idleness is never worthwhile. Read, write and be active. This is what I can do at my age.... ! Thank you Rico.
Date: 11/23/2022 5:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading about the birth of poetry in your splendid, creative descriptions, Valsa. Your muse never lets you down. Best to you.
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Date: 11/23/2022 6:02:00 PM
Glad that you feel my muse never lets me down.Thanks a lot Vijay !
Date: 11/23/2022 2:36:00 AM
Amen, I love it , nothing like coming out that darkness, then to inherit all this new mind and overflowing living water,
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Date: 11/23/2022 6:01:00 PM
Thanks a lot Stephan for the constant encouragement you are giving. Stay blessed!
Date: 11/22/2022 10:40:00 PM
Nicely done, especially "looted honeycomb!" Elizabeth
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Date: 11/23/2022 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Elizabeth. As a child I remember my father taking honey from the hives placed in different parts of our compound. When the combs are taken out, bees will be covering them.

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